Pls review My blog and give me your opinion

Discussion in 'Websites' started by voxmic, Jul 12, 2009.

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    hello every body
    i hope that you are good and fine
    Pls review my blog and give me your opinion
    i am a new start in blogger
    so i really need your opinion
    best regard
    Mostafa

    MY BLOG

     
    voxmic, Jul 12, 2009 IP
  2. oracleweb

    oracleweb Peon

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    Hi Mostafa

    When I went to your site I wanted to leave immediately. It is just too busy with advertising.
    advertising should not overwhelm content-- instead the quality content should sell the advertising.

    Best
     
    oracleweb, Jul 12, 2009 IP
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    Oracleweb is right, there are still no many ads. Putting categories on the side helps navigation into different posts. You might like to put up a latest posts widget too. I would think putting up an alexa rank badge at this point is also meaningless at such an early stage. I've noticed you've got alot of tabs for adding to feed and bookmark readers at the bottom, how about using just one such as "share this" and moving it up to the top right hand of your sidebar?
     
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    Oracleweb is definitely correct. The ads are extremely cluttered and overwhelming. I didn't even read the content or know what the site was about in the first 10 seconds. You will have a 99.99% bounce rate.

    Also you can see that the green in the "About Me" and in the stetson advertisement are closely related and provides clashingggg.

    Your header advertisement banner looks like a pirates treasure map, and more like an advertisement than something that has to do with what ever it is your site is about (i left before reading.)
     
    brandon93s, Jul 12, 2009 IP