Review My New Online Income Blog

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    While you are there you can also pickup some really nice products you can turn around and resell for 100% profit. www.plrproductgiveaway.com
     
    vwillis, Jun 15, 2009 IP
  2. DianeS55

    DianeS55 Peon

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    Very attractive, professional, appealing website. Three grammar and usage suggestions for you:

    1. "If you are interested in joining the growing number of individuals who work from home.

    Then we strongly encourage you to take a close look at this excellent opportunity to start selling resell rights products."

    Should be "If you are interested in joining the growing number of individuals who work from home, then we strongly encourage you to take a close look at this excellent opportunity to start selling resell rights products."

    2. " It might just be your solution!" This statement does not fit in with the confident tone of your website. May I recommend you say something more like "Reselling PLR products has been just the solution many successful people have needed!"

    3. "For Those: Looking For Something To Sell Online, You Have Just Stumbled Upon An Absolute Goldmine!"

    May I suggest this instead? "For Those Looking for Something to Sell Online - You Have Just DISCOVERED an Absolute Goldmine!" The colon after 'For Those' is not correct punctuation.

    Best of luck to you!
     
    DianeS55, Jun 15, 2009 IP
  3. vwillis

    vwillis Well-Known Member

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    Thanks DianeS55,
    That's just what I was looking for. It's easy to over look some things. That's why it help to get reviews from other people.
     
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    Tried for a few times, still it could not load even the homepage - got only the title appeared.. my connection works fine..
     
    Tsid, Jun 16, 2009 IP
  5. vwillis

    vwillis Well-Known Member

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    hmmmmm Tsid,

    I just tried the link and it worked fine for me. Please if anyone else has problems with it loading let me know, so I can fix that before I start any advertising.
     
    vwillis, Jun 16, 2009 IP
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    Your all posts are not categorised yet however category widget is appearing on bar.
     
    veikoh, Jun 16, 2009 IP
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    Had a tough time getting site to load. The look is superb!
     
    mikehARING, Jun 16, 2009 IP
  8. vwillis

    vwillis Well-Known Member

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    Sorry for the inconvenience, hosting provider was doing work. Everything should load much faster now
     
    vwillis, Jun 17, 2009 IP
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    Some grammatical errors, which people have mentioned, but otherwise it's a pretty good, well designed site. I would get rid of the RSS link, however, or move it somewhere else.
     
    CrownVictoriaCop, Jun 17, 2009 IP
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    vwillis Well-Known Member

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    Although english in my language, I need help when it come to writing good english. Can you kindly point out the errors so I can fix them.
     
    vwillis, Jun 17, 2009 IP
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    very nice site
    i have find some books that i need
    but pls but more and more books in financail
     
    voxmic, Jun 17, 2009 IP