Do you ever write poems

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  1. tock

    tock Peon

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    #41
    I dont write them i think is to hard :D
     
    tock, May 19, 2009 IP
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    #42
    yes i do and songs but im to shy to tell cause they lovey dovey.xx
     
    david17589, May 19, 2009 IP
  3. ebk

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    #43
    Yeah I suck at them, not going to make a living at it, but I still enjoy writing them, makes me feel close to her.
     
    ebk, May 21, 2009 IP
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    cessvergara Banned

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    #44
    yes i do...and i love this thing. here's the poem i recently composed:

    "WHISPER OF COMFORT"

    I hang myself in bed, I felt so alone.
    A heart of emptiness I'm suff'ring for so long.
    My eyes shed in tears, I grieved and mourned,
    Surrounded and locked by these walls of stone.


    I heard then the music, a music of love,
    Where I captured the peace and rest my weary heart.
    I was filled with comfort from somewhere within,
    Made me cry harder for the gladness that I feel.


    That music from YOU wiped away the ache;
    And melted out the sorrow these world had made.
    A moment of freedom I found in YOU,
    As I surrender my heart to be changed and renewed.


    For all those times I've thought I'm alone,
    I realized I am not, for YOU'RE with me all along.
    In my heart I could sing the greatest love song that I know,
    For with YOU is the place where I know I belong.
     
    cessvergara, May 21, 2009 IP
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    #45
    I never tried to write poems. maybe because im not fond of writing it.
     
    boracay package, May 27, 2009 IP
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    #46
    yes, I wrote few, in my school day, still I wrote when I am sad, but I didn't show it to others
     
    susmita, May 28, 2009 IP
  7. Rochishma.B.Narender

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    #47
    i never tried :(
     
    Rochishma.B.Narender, May 28, 2009 IP
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    Yulianto Banned

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    #48
    i'm never wrote a poems...
    i don't know how to write it..
    and i'm not a romantic people...
    :D
     
    Yulianto, May 28, 2009 IP
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    #49
    i never write the poem and not planning for future also. for me its boring subject
     
    submissionguru, May 28, 2009 IP
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    #50
    Never really got very far with writing poems, I did want to try a Haiku but never got going with it!
     
    OfficeBoy, May 28, 2009 IP
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    #51
    I never felt I wanted a lot of things as I was just 'moving' through life with no direction, no nothing, until I met her.
     
    ebk, May 28, 2009 IP
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    #52
    I naver wrote a poem.
    I think i can't.
     
    TIRTH, May 28, 2009 IP