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Please review my site:

loans and scholarships

 

There is too much empty white space at the top of the page.

The site is lacking images and videos. Maybe add some pictures of college kids.

Meta description is too long. The recommended length for the meta description is around 12 - 15 words. Yours has 30 words, and its full of trash - examples: to, a , give, at, help, each, other. None of those words are targeted towards student loan consolidation. The meta description should be a short sentence about 12 - 15 words long and only use targeted keywords that are related to your sites topic.

 

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There is also nothing separating the content besides white space, which makes navigation more difficult.

 

i dont think the nav fits with the rest of the skin, you should try to redo the header to make it a bit smaller, and put the nav inline with the black bar thats under the white text acting as a logo.

i belive that would look better than all the links with a blue line one after another going down.

 

no offence, it looks like those ebook websites that wanna sell something.
first cut those link at the top of the page.
Have something to expres about your blog ? Create some About / contact / privacy pages. Make it look more professional.
Second, whats with those link at the end ? Its like a link farm.
Place them propperly or create a " Friends" page and put them there.

Best advice, if your going with free blogs, go for a blogspot one, at least it will give you a plus for the looks.

 

thanks every one for your valued comments, i have changed the things in accordanc ewith your valuable suggestion like to hear more from you
thx again

 

Useful site and gives lot of information about the loans but the banner looks old and no attractive item is added in home page.

 

thx buddy for ur valuable input.but what type of items you think can i add to the home page? i will be great ful if u suggest some?

 

I like the website, it's to the point and informative, I do agree you should add some pics, pictures are good for your website

 

ok i m going to add pics now,thx

 

nice one... very informative... keep up the good work

 

thx for ur valuable input, i m always willing to improve it and trying to add more things to it

 

I'd rate it as average as even though the layout is clean it looks very ordinary.
Also remove partner links from main page as they take too much space and your site looks like you're selling links.

 

maybe you should add some image. Overwall site look great.

 

If u would add some images than it would be nice i think.

 

Yeh find it a little a busy/ noisy. Better to plan just one or two styles rather than all the links for partner sites.

Good luck with it.

 

1. partner links removed ,looking better now (to me as well)
2. trying to find images will be updated soon


anyother new suggestion

thx everyone for ur valuable input

 

Im viewing it in mozilla.And the menu titles seem to be cut off from the drop down menu.Like I can see only "Student Loan Consderation R" under Student Loans.Same with a few other menu items.Rest is fine.Like others said add a few images..like a group of students, a university/school with people in front etc.

 

changed the setting snow see is it fine with mozilla

 

Nice blog. Very informative, i like it.