Review My Site Please

Discussion in 'Websites' started by euhlir, Apr 6, 2009.

  1. #1
    So I finally set up a website for my professional article writing and submission service, but haven't been having the best conversion rates. So what I am wondering is ways I can improve the site to increase sales. Also I'd like to know if there is anything that should be changed. I'm looking for constructive criticism to make my site better.

    HERE IS THE SITE
     
    euhlir, Apr 6, 2009 IP
  2. KBunn

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    #2
    Honestly, the only thing that I noticed were a few punctuation mistakes on your website. Although the article excerpts are not the most thrilling that I have ever read, they are good and I don't see a way that you could increase sales other than possibly adding more available packages. Perhaps special packs for those wishing to order in bulk? Good luck to you!
     
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  3. ebobeye

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    Not sure if its just my computer, but the images seem to load up slowly. As for the design, i think it looks a little old fashioned and not very modern, not sure...
     
    ebobeye, Apr 7, 2009 IP
  4. fozz

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    #4
    Looks good man, stylish and professional.
     
    fozz, Apr 7, 2009 IP
  5. SB-Ali

    SB-Ali Active Member

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    #5
    Nice design but you can optimize AdSense boxes ;)
     
    SB-Ali, Apr 7, 2009 IP
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    #6
    It's clean, simple, and does the job of showcasing your offerings. The only thing I would suggest is have different images on each of the pages instead of the same ones.
     
    john_tb, Apr 7, 2009 IP
  7. ifashion

    ifashion Member

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    #7
    I like it. It looks really good, nicely designed, well organized and stylish.
     
    ifashion, Apr 7, 2009 IP
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    #8
    While it is a little tacky with the live pictures, it does look pretty professional. Not a huge fan of the tan banner, but it works pretty well with the blue.

    Overall 8/10
     
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  9. memnomLEE

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    Profesional design!!
     
    memnomLEE, Apr 8, 2009 IP
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    #10
    Not crazy about the centerd text, makes it look like a sales pitch or recipe or something
     
    KingTitus, Apr 8, 2009 IP
  11. SiteFlipGuru

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    #11
    Very nice!
     
    SiteFlipGuru, Apr 8, 2009 IP
  12. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Nice blog. I found that some of the text in the content are displayed out of boundary, check it out..
     
    2advance, Apr 8, 2009 IP
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    The website itself looks very professional, but one thing I think is lacking is the credentials. The samples section is very good and offers a great view on these articles. I would recommend having a small testimonials section, or anything else that will push someone over the sticking point of buying the service.
     
    mdiak47, Apr 8, 2009 IP
  14. euhlir

    euhlir Peon

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    Thanks everyone who checked it out. I really like all the ideas you gave me.
     
    euhlir, Apr 20, 2009 IP
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    #15
    The design looks professional. Good site.
    I also think that it should have different pictures on different pages.
     
    drdavisjr, Apr 20, 2009 IP
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    #16
    which script do you used? It seems very slow...
    Design is great!
     
    idcspy, Apr 21, 2009 IP
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    #17
    Hi,

    I checked out your site. I found that you don't have links to "TOS" and "Privacy Policy". They are just plain words.
     
    ashsmh, Apr 21, 2009 IP
  18. euhlir

    euhlir Peon

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    Yes I did notice it does load slow. It's built off of IWeb 09 for Mac.
     
    euhlir, Apr 21, 2009 IP
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    #19
    hey I saw your website I really liked it keep up the great work
     
    Brihead4040, Apr 21, 2009 IP