Can I get a quick review of my LP?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by SitPoMk, Nov 21, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hey all

    I'm not making too much money here so I don't feel very protective of my niche and LP as of now. I was wondering if I someone can give me some pointers on my LP and let me know if I'm on the right track.

    http://get-your-ex-back.co.cc/

    I am not sure if I should make it a selling page (like the main vendor LP) or a review page.I don't have that much experience with Internet marketing my skills are limited to web design and graphics.

    Also do you think such a landing page would be better with article marketing or with PPC?

    thank you

    -Sasha
     
    SitPoMk, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  2. mill123

    mill123 Active Member

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    You should do ok with PPC on that content. dont use tiny url. simple php or html redirects are best.

    as usual go hard out on social bookmarking. get some backlinks etc.

    dunno about the co.cc domain tbh.
     
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    rikat Well-Known Member

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    Nice page but ...

    Yeah, get rid of the tinyurl.

    I would also remove the top link altogether. Bottom feels incomplete ...

    And what's up with your Alexa ranking... that would be absolutely wild should it be true!
     
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    mill123 Active Member

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  5. SitPoMk

    SitPoMk Peon

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    thanks for the quick review guys! I was thinking that the top link will increase conversions and CTR. Do you think it will have the reverse effect? also I agree with the bottom being incomplete I think I will add a testimonial.

    I actually have not checked my Alexa rank but as mill123 pointed out that would be the co.cc domain. Once i see atleast some success (and feel a bit more confident) I will buy my own domain and ditch the co.cc. I've set up this page while ago I actually completely forgot that there is a tinyURL link there. A PHP or 303 redirect sounds much better. Thanks for the pointers!

    On adwords I only got a Quality Score of 7 while I was hoping for a 9 to 10 does anyone here know what the problem might be? The QS is for the keyword "get your ex back" as you may have guessed.
     
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  6. mill123

    mill123 Active Member

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    check out www.clicktale.com to see what your visitors are doing.

    easy to setup and its free.
     
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    mcjp6 Well-Known Member

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    couple of quick comments that may help, put your testimonials on your page, do not make people to click to see them, people are lazy! get yourself a sitemap,

    in your root directory create a file in notebook like:

    <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 TRANSITIONAL//EN">
    <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
    <head>
    <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1" />
    <title>Earth4Energy</title>
    <meta http-equiv="Refresh" content="0; url=http://www.youraffiliatelink.com">
    </head>

    <body>
    </body>
    </html>

    save it as your_ex_back.html then replace your tiny url link with /your_ex_back.html that will look a lot nicer when people mouse over your links :):)
     
    mcjp6, Nov 22, 2008 IP
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    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    Looks good, but maybe a button instead of text at the bottom for call-to-action, will work better :)
     
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    Wow I had no clue clicktale was free. I am actually staring at my heatmap right now, incredibly useful. It makes me wonder how they do it heh

    Thanks for the tip ;) I actually wasn't aware that you can do that with a meta tag, I was planning to do this with PHP. Is there any real difference? And actually, the link I have to testimonials currently isn't even on my page, it just sends the person straight to the sellers landing page.

    That actually makes sense and I was thinking about that but I saw that all the top products have biiig uuugly blue links at the bottom and I thought, well they must be doing something right, I might as well follow. I felt bad making it ugly like that because I've always been one for aesthetically pleasing products.
     
    SitPoMk, Nov 22, 2008 IP