Please Review My New CJ Store

Discussion in 'Commission Junction' started by akmanda, Nov 16, 2008.

  1. #1
    This Is My New Store...

    savior-angel.com

    Please Review and give some feedback...

    Thank You
     
    akmanda, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  2. Kerosene

    Kerosene Alpha & Omega™ Staff

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    #2
    • No content
    • No header image
    • Too many banner ads
    • White text on black bg! (didn't we learn this lesson in 1998?)
    • "Posting Categories" in footer is broken (at least in FF2)
    • Invalid code (missing a </div>, and has some empty <p>s)
    • No content (did I say that already?)

    :)
     
    Kerosene, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  3. akmanda

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    #3
    Thank You,,,
    have an idea how to fix it?
     
    akmanda, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  4. Kerosene

    Kerosene Alpha & Omega™ Staff

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    #4
    • Write some content
    • Create a header image
    • Remove most of the banner ads
    • Change the text to black text on white bg

    Errmmm....
     
    Kerosene, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  5. mcjp6

    mcjp6 Well-Known Member

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    #5
    I knew you would leave one for me!

    Top left corner where it says "Skip To Content" actually does not go anywhere, least of all to any content. . tag cloud doing my head in

    needs a little work :)
     
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  6. Kerosene

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    The "Skip To Content" destination anchor is about 200 pixels down the page. I guess it's for people using homemade ultra low res monitors?

    I didn't mention the tag cloud. The less said about that the better. ;)
     
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    #7
    TOO MUCH OF BANNER ADS DISTRACT THE MOOD OF SHOPPING ONLINE! THE VIEWER MAY DISTRACTED FROM HIS ORIGINAL INTENTION OF SHOPPING. :confused:
     
    aaafour, Nov 16, 2008 IP
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    #8
    I think the tag cloud is kind of cool... could be a little bigger thoiugh.


    The problem is "cool" doesn't necessarily convert, functional converts much better.
     
    nosleepno, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    #9
    I notice some "broken english" in various places. Poor spelling and grammar will discourage people from doing business with you. If youhave difficulties, try spell check or online formatting & spelling services for free.
     
    rainmaker75, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    vcczone Banned

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    #10
    nice..but used many product from many catagory...i think you should use a same catagory product.that means same niche.so that if you can promote you site in a same niche ..so your conversation rate will be higher.
    can you pls inform me what plugins you have used in this site...?
     
    vcczone, Nov 20, 2008 IP
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    some of the links to buy products dont even work(well they work but it says the product does not exist on the other site) i only checked one product and it was that cover for the white toyota
     
    aflac68, Nov 20, 2008 IP
  12. akmanda

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    Just Go to my Sig link..it's a software that use by me at that site...
     
    akmanda, Nov 20, 2008 IP
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    Not bad but your niche is too broad. Find a topic like shoes or computers or something like that and focus on it.


    Also, what did you use to display your products like that. Was that generated by pop shops?
     
    TurkeyEater, Nov 20, 2008 IP
  14. akmanda

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    Just click "software" at my signature link...
     
    akmanda, Nov 20, 2008 IP
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    u need to target 1 niche and only the one with larger demand
     
    wounded1987, Nov 20, 2008 IP
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    #16
    nice start to store.. getting involved with CJ too and like the platform you used.
     
    msjudged_1, Nov 21, 2008 IP
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    #17
    the link for purchasing the VW Car cover is dead. It brings you to an Error page on AutoAnything.
     
    humanedited, Nov 21, 2008 IP