Please review my draft

Discussion in 'Websites' started by arteaga624, Nov 7, 2008.

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    some time ago i asked here on DP for a review of my board (onlinewebmarket.net) and i received tons of feedbacks, well almost all those comments was for reducing the home page due is too long and a bit heavy when site loads. Now i'm working on a smaller, faster and better organized homepage so i would see your comments and suggestions about this draft.

    Here is the page: http://www.onlinewebmarket.net/home2.php

    Thanks in advance :cool:
     
    arteaga624, Nov 7, 2008 IP
  2. kadesmith

    kadesmith Peon

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    In your links, Advertise "Wit" Us is spelled wrong.

    The light blue color on the white & light blue background is really hard for me to read.
     
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  3. arteaga624

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    Thanks for the fast reply kadesmith, misspelling solved, font's color changed. any other comment please?

     
    arteaga624, Nov 7, 2008 IP
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    addlinkurl Well-Known Member

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    8 seconds. i dont see too many gifs but 8 seconds is not good. i think server is slow.
     
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    Let me check this. BTW where are you (i mean from wich country you are entering this page)?.-

     
    arteaga624, Nov 7, 2008 IP