You didn't respect the colors. The image on the left is too flashy. I don't really like the font you used. You may try a brand new entry maybe? Thanks
can you give more feedback to me other than "Thansk for your entry bonzer!" just so I know to add or change something ?
one last try for this competition.. will be willing to make any changes on this though, as per CH's feedback.. feedback highly appreciated
thank u for ur valuable feedback here is my revised good entry concept :- if u combine the two slashed lines and the text logo an S is formed which stands for Ecstacy or Sex hope u like it