I need suggestions on my leading page on how to market this I am tryna generate leads ..I am gonna be doing ppc with google and a few other things any other suggestions or about search engines? Thanks www.modifyyourloanwithus.com
Here's exactly what Google expects from your landing page: http://adwords.google.com/support/bin/answer.py?answer=46675&cbid=-pa2mzibqvr59&src=cb&lev=answer
nice design, but first thing that is obvious: no "contact us", no "about us" pages and these are kinda "must haves" now
Well as has been already stated, no real info as to who or what business or organisation runs your site. I mean, if your asking people to insert their loan details, albeit just the monetary sum and length of loan etc, then surely these people must have some sort of trust in your site. You don't supply any trust or cred on the page. To me, it just looks like it's a "list building" interface, although it looks inviting, there's no site contactable details, address, phone number, contact us etc, nor any other pages to suggest there's a real person or business running the site. Cheers.
Yes, you need an about us section -- the user will want to know they are giving their information to a reputable outfit.
well to generate leads is the site I built done the wrong way? like everyone is telling me to use ppc but I need money.. whats other ways to get this site out there and generate some good leads?
It's a nice landing page, but I would definitely have an e-mail address where people can contact you, not everyone likes using a phone to contact you.
That's pretty much of a squeeze page. Just about all Internet users back out of them because there simply is not enough info on a squeeze page to sell them on.
Stay away from PPC unless you know what you are doing. Organic search traffic is what you need - build backlinks - in all the usual places
well i have to commend you on the fact that your design is very aesthetically pleasing, but your capture page looks like a pop-up, you may want to make it look slightly more professional and reserved. Take a look at http://www.halifax.co.uk which uses a blue background like yours, but somehow looks way more professional. People wouldn't trust you with their details with a page like that. Also bring the form fields above the fold.