Rate My Latest Design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by definitely, Oct 11, 2008.

  1. #1
    Friends, this is my second theme...

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    Please give your feedback...

    Regards,
    Sunny Kumar Gupta,
    KreativeNetworks
     
    definitely, Oct 11, 2008 IP
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  2. tinimini

    tinimini Peon

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    Good work mate, looks decent to me.
    But that white color on top of header could be change to somthing else.
    its just too simple.
     
    tinimini, Oct 11, 2008 IP
  3. definitely

    definitely Well-Known Member

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    Thx for your suggestion dude... ;)
     
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  4. hkarakis

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    i like it good work. i can see the light in your eyes :D
     
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  5. cougarxs

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    very nice mate, good to see some people having a crack at it
     
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    It looks great i like the white background makes for a "clean" look
     
    aflac68, Oct 11, 2008 IP
  7. Joshua Pitts

    Joshua Pitts Well-Known Member

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    Looks very good. Maybe make the gallery block a little bigger so the images can be bigger/
     
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    #8
    Overall, it's pretty solid. There's a few things I'd look into, though:
    • You have too many fonts going. I'm seeing Times, Arial and three others on there.
    • I'm not liking the hard gradient in the middle of the block of text. It makes text hard to read.
    • The should probably set on the right edge somewhere; not necessarily hugging the side, just not centered.
    • The menu shouldn't be so tall that it produces whitespace under it.

    The rest looks pretty good. A could of quick tweaks and you're be good to go! Salut d'un autre francais! :D
     
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  9. 8everything

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    #9
    It needs quite a bit of work.. but it's an okay start.

    - Try making fonts more consistent and selecting them wisely to suit the overall look of your layout.
    - The graphical elements need to be redone (maybe introduce icons instead of just glossy blocks)
    - The photograph in the header is distorted, when resizing you need to do it according to the proportions of the original file and then crop
     
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    alygames Well-Known Member

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    very good for a travell company. i like the combination of colours
     
    alygames, Oct 11, 2008 IP
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    I think its a cool design, hardly see designs with a vertical menu in the middle of the banner
     
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    #12
    Looks like a nice layout that was well thought out. I think the only things that I'm not fond of are how many different fonts you are using on the page, and on your navigation I'm not sure about the ribbons that are sort of faded out...but its all subjective anyway...Nice work!:D
     
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  13. definitely

    definitely Well-Known Member

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    Thx a ton friends... i love the response you people are giving me.

    You sure are right.. ;)

    thx a lot frnd.

    glad to hear the white space is doin its work. ;)

    thx a lot... will keep it in ming for future designs. ;)

    Thx mate... will surely keep all this in mind while developing something next time. ;)

    Thx for the overall quick analysis. Your Icons idea is nyc... i'll try incorporating them in the newer versions. ;)

    Thx... thats the type of company this template is developed for.

    Thx a lot dude... .nyc to hear that you lyk my idea... ;)

    Well the ribbons were just a play with curves and it clicked out nyc... will keep in mind to put in less of those from next time.... ;)


    Regards,
    Sunny Kumar Gupta,
    KreativeNetworks
     
    definitely, Oct 12, 2008 IP