So I got this website 2 weeks back (I think). It looks quite good, but I think the sales page is quite short, or wtf is going on? only 1 sale? :| Complete Wedding Plan - This is the site I'm not an expert affiliate, but if you want to make a site to promote this product , I can help you promote your content...or even provide you with rewritten content. I have abt 30 ezarticles up I can tweak!
Your product page looks real good, but what you lack are testimonials mostly, apart from "happy couple" pictures...which you can buy/get for free or a minimal fee. With messages like "our plan was a complete mess until we got xxx ebook and helped us throw the perfect wedding!". Also, the prose in your sales page is a little lacking in fluidity, the copy kinda needs to be a little longer, and more easy to read in your head. Do try visiting the warrior forum and let them judge your copy, you'll get a lotta useful info and criticisms Anyways, good luck in your effort.
Testimonials are a very good idea, I will put some up these days. Thanks for your help. Btw can you recommend me a good copywriter that can make decent sales letter?
First tweak your landing page: 1. Signature?????????? I as a potential customer want to know who wrote this. 2. P.S.:???????? Bla.....bla... bla..... I as a potential customer want to know that you are truly concerned about my wedding... 3. Testimonials:???? Already mentioned. But try to make sure that they ain't only text but also have.... say the wedding picture of the couple 4. Affiliate Link:?????? I'm assuming your potential customers are not blind and have the ability to use the mouse. Its very close to the order button! That means: Get your "Affiliate Program" link removed from their and instead put in your footer right at the bottom, something like the forex autocash robot. And make sure its fonts small and are not bold. As for your decent sales letter requirement. If you would like to hire me for a respectable amount, I'll be willing to work with you...
Just a quick glance at it... so not too much to say, apart from I didn't really get the immediate sense that it was about weddings. Would a softer background colour work better? What about an image of a bride in dress on a light blue/pink/purple background (basically a softer colour/pastel-like colour or calming type mood color - Red = powerful... get people more relaxed etc).
Yep, you need to show people this is about weddings as soon as they arrive at your site. A new Header maybe? Anyway, here's some free stock pics:http://www.sxc.hu/browse.phtml?f=search&txt=wedding+couple&w=1&x=0&y=0 Good luck!
I never thought the design was...wrong. In fact, I really like it! I will test with a bride picture and see how it goes
I am not saying the design is wrong ... I am just saying that Red is quite powerful and I don't think I ever seen a wedding site with such a strong colour used. I also just looked at the other images on the site... and red is only used for your book and the 101 romantic ideas - the other books have softer colours and appear more "weddingy"
I agree that a softer background color might be better. The site is nice looking, but I don't think red is appropriate for weddings. Also, maybe this sentence should be more direct and postive, change "Warning: Planning Your Wedding Day Before Reading This Guide Will Cost You Money.." to something like "The Complete Wedding Plan Guide can help you save money without sacrificing plans for your special day." My version isn't that good, but I don't think it's a good idea to start off with a foreboding tone.
Actually, his customers are people looking to save both time and money. So it'll be good to have a header that stresses the importance of saving both, and the effectiveness of the guide in doing so....too fuzzy to come up with one right now though