I have just launched my website. Its a website that sells Gas Saving Tips. Please comment on any aspect of my site that needs improvement. Its at http://www.200gassavingtips.com/
i think its your width is too wide for my eye balls to read. Maybe you can reduce the width for easier reading.
Yes I agree with sunnyflakes, try using a fixed width (780px or similar) like I did on my website and reduce the font size a bit. Also I wouldn't use comic sans for a sales page, and in form you should use a table to align the text fields.
The site does not look professional and the text in the body of the page is too large. You should get a professional template, get a logo, and add some graphics to the page.
Personally I am not a fan of sites that have 11 pages of continuous text with differing fonts and colors. I'm not saying there is not a market for it, this just reminds me of all of the "Let me teach you how to make a million dollars online in 15 minutes a day" sites. Just my 2 cents. Good luck!
One more thought. Have you thought of writing a blog and giving away a few tips per day? I think you could attract quite a bit of niche traffic that way.
Sory my friend but that website you got there totaly waste Hard to read hard to navigate even there aren any content.. if you use statics pages you should hire someone make you a web2.0 css style website..
You need to have more pictures and graphics. No one wants to read a giant wall of text. Also too in the section below where it says "...check out just SOME of the working guides you will get to know:" I would add bullet points for each of those benefits
Too wide, but more importantly, way too scammy. I understand it's made to be like a hard-pitch site but to be honest, every reasonable gas saving tip is already online, and many are false. Search 'hypermiling' to get just about all of them. If you clean it up and make it clear what exactly the customer can get out of it, perhaps it would come off better.