My new Site, tell me what you think

Discussion in 'Websites' started by seanyboyyo, Sep 13, 2008.

  1. #1
    Almost every link on this site is an affiliate link.

    http://www.sitesubmissionservices.net


    Tell me what you think and would your first thought think to click on one of the links on the left or the right?

    let me know,

    sean
     
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  2. HydroJohn

    HydroJohn Active Member

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    First thing i would do is add some content, the center column is just bear. I would also get a professional banner because the one you have currently doesnt complement your theme as well as it could. Also maybe try and find a better support button as its a bit nasty quality on my screen. Apart from that it looks fine, the ebook covers look great and the site navigation is really easy! I wish you the best of luck with it :)
     
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  3. seanyboyyo

    seanyboyyo Banned

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    thanks alot, Im fine with my banner at the moment (it could be better, but not bad enough for me to complain). I have some support pictures but really I dont need support as I just refer people to other peoples sites, so its there just to make people feel secure.

    thanks for your opinion hydrojohn.

    --sean
     
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    ms2134 Well-Known Member

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    #4
    I like your site, the main banner at the top is creative and give a warm and creative feeling, you have a nice navigation system which compliments your site well.
    The paypal verfied logo is a good choice, as it shows that we can trust the site.
    You have worked hard on the graphics and logos on the site and that impresses me.

    By the look of the site and the way it has been layed out it looks trusting and makes me want to look around more.

    Good work on the site,
    ~Mike
     
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  5. HydroJohn

    HydroJohn Active Member

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    Nice review for a new member! Keep going with it and you will be a well valued member soon :D

    No Problem :)

    Whilst the paypal verifieid logo is there it doesnt impress me because i know i can get the same one from google image search :D The lack of site content worries me and would put me of from purchasing a product. Maybe get rid of that enormous picture in the middle and write about 3 or 4 paragrpahs about your site, like when it was established, what you offer, what makes you better than the rest etc... Hope this helps :)
     
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  6. shazim

    shazim Well-Known Member

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    as per me its not looking professinal try chaging the image in between and colur scheme
     
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  7. seanyboyyo

    seanyboyyo Banned

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    thanks alot for this awsome reply ms. I like your opinions and agree with the things you have to say, and we must be alike, because I made the site for people to say what u did.

    thanks again, I will take into consideration your fact about 3-4 paragraphs about the site. In fact I may do that now

    You dont know what your talking about (unless you provide some specific examples of what u like and dont like)

    thanks everyone,

    sean
     
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    Mandar Banned

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    #8
    Good template and nice content !!
     
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    seanyboyyo Banned

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    #9
    thanks alot.

    Greatly appreciated.

    anymore constructive critisism would be appreciated.

    --sean
     
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    tonystuck Peon

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    #10
    your site look as web portal. too many outer-link,
    for me, i'll bookmark the useful link from your site and ignore your site next.
    I will come again to your site if i found web content is always updated, else why i need to come again?
    right?
     
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  11. CollabStation.com

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    looks good, but if you could upgrade the icons or images to higher quality photos/icons that would top it off.
     
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    remoradea Banned

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    #12
    Probably I would click If I wanted to buy one of those books, but:

    As a possible buyer I cannot reach your website because it will not rank for most of the book titles and affiliate material you present in there. Probably I will reach your website trough the words "Site Submission Services", looking for some manual directory submission jobs or software. Because that is the only text that google takes into account when placing the page in the search engine. And probably it will not rank well, because your internal linking structure is almost zero.

    Anyway the first step you covered well, you placed the materials just ready to be clicked. Now write interesting material to target the possible buyers.

    So the answer is: Yes, the layout is quite good.
     
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  13. seanyboyyo

    seanyboyyo Banned

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    #13
    Taken into consideration.

    thanks for an honest opinion

    this is sort of the plan. but very true, no reason to come back

    I plan on buying traffic to get people to the site. and maybe some from google in the future.
     
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    #14
    HI

    What is the main focus of your site.... are you trying to sell ebooks or directory submission services..

    I can see your site offers submission services.. but for what topic I do not know..

    Article Submissions.
    Link Directory Submissions
    Software Submissions...
    Press Release Submissions...

    Make your first page that people land on clear toward what you offer or are trying to sell

    Layout is ok.. but the graphics needs work

    Tom
     
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    #15
    Site is look is great, but remove or link 24/7 support image. It could hurt site value.
     
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    seanyboyyo Banned

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    #16

    agreed.

    thanks alot, I need to change links to make them more appealing, so people know what there looking at when they get there.

    --sean
     
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    #17
    Hi,

    Some comments:

    1) I believe most people don't like to read a lot of text on web sites so I'd rather not have to read those 3 fat paragraphs of text in small font in your main page.

    2) When I visit a page like yours, I want to know what it's about right away.
    So first I see your main title "Site Submission Services" and I tell myself: "great, this guy is offering me a service to submit my site to a holw bunch of search engines so as to promote my site". But then I look at the sidebar menus, on left and right and what's offered is something completely different and varied. So in the end the whole site seems unclear to me. Just another site trying to offer too many things at a time with no clear focus.

    Regards
     
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    seanyboyyo Banned

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    #18
    thank you very much.

    your #2 has inspired me and I changed almost all the links on my site to some sort of submissions!

    thanks alot to everyone

    if anyone else has something to add be my guest.

    --sean
     
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    #19
    Your site looks nice now. May be you should consider changing the lady's image as it is used in too many web sites. Also putting up some text content may get you some traffic from search engine, but u know that better than me as you are an SEO expert yourself.
     
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    #20
    I think that you have to work on the content, but the design looks very nice!
     
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