Please Review My Website And Tell Me What You Think

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    snotb4ll, Sep 11, 2008 IP
  2. guevara93

    guevara93 Peon

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    The design is really neat. I like it. I also like the idea. I dont see any errors that can be fixed. Good Job.
     
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  3. Jeccles

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    #3
    First off - you need to re-proofread your site. I found this in "What is a Safe List?"

    You also alternately have it as "safelist" and "safe list".

    It has a great look to it, but unless you fix the text (and I found lots of other grammar/spelling mistakes) it is going to come off as amateur.
     
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  4. kingofsanda

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    The overall layout and design is nice and it's easy to navigate. But I
    have to agree with Jeccles I think the gramatical errors should be fixed.
     
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    redink11 Active Member

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    #5
    nice professional looking site - like it
     
    redink11, Sep 12, 2008 IP
  6. jamuna

    jamuna Active Member

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    #6
    neat theme
    good work
     
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  7. snotb4ll

    snotb4ll Peon

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    Thanks for the reviews.

    I will go back and look over the text.

    One thing I would like to point out is I use "safelist" and "safe list" because those are 2 keywords I'm trying to rank for. So I try to switch it up. Not sure if it helps or hurts, but thats why I did that.
     
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  8. Burano

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    I also think you need to add more spacing to your left margin, the text needs more breathing room on either side.
     
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  9. Jeccles

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    You can still put both variations into your keywords, but I would suggest that you keep the spelling constant within the body of your text.
     
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    #10
    wow looks really good. i like the icons.
     
    Soamelt, Sep 12, 2008 IP
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    #11
    Menus on sidebar are looking good..but on the top header u just cut a photo n pasted !!well what's the design in that?? The idea of the site is perfect n try to add a favicon
     
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  12. snotb4ll

    snotb4ll Peon

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    Thanks for the great tips and ideas.

    I fixed some of the spelling errors, added a fav. icon, fixed the spacing with the text on the left hand side, and I even added a 160x600 ad on the left hand side that I created.
     
    snotb4ll, Sep 13, 2008 IP
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    remoradea Banned

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    Good looking website, looks like you invested some hard work in it.

    There are only a few things I like to mention:

    - The articles on the left site look like Google adds, maybe you should change the look a bit. The titles should be bigger because there is no real contrast with the text, the eye is not drawn to them.
    - I see that you can improve the internal linking structure. If I click on a article from the left site, and all the rest dissapear in the details page. Maybe do a related articles section under each, to improve the internal linking and boost a bit those keywords from the titles.
    - the rest seems to bee ok, good work until now
     
    remoradea, Sep 13, 2008 IP
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    myheartbeats Banned

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    #14
    many errors i found
     
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  15. Ian08

    Ian08 Well-Known Member

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    It is better to use tableless layout.
     
    Ian08, Sep 13, 2008 IP