Why I can not make a single sale???

Hi all

I have been writing articles on ezine and getting a decent amount of traffic from it, but the traffic does not convert to a single sale!!!!

This is getting fraustrating.... can some1 pls. review my landing page
www.yornz.com

or give me any tip or something to make me a sale, its been 3weeks and no sale what so ever!!!

 

I'll be blunt. The landing page sucks. Not just the design but how it's layed out. Get rid of the ezine articles and concentrate more on converting the visitor.

 

I too am interested in writing articles, haven't done so yet. Is there anyone out there that gets traffic from submitting articles resulting in sales? Would you mind sharing your 'secret' with us, please? Thanks, Erika

 

Haha! ok man, first of all and this is NOT the first time we told you this, GET RID OF THAT UGLY DOMAIN NAME, ok? Yornz.com doesn't mean anything pay another $10 and change it to something more relevant instead of just complaining on why you cant make sales.

I totally agree, the design is horrible, it sucks, sorry mate but it's true. The layout is all messed up. I wouldn't buy from you, so concentrate and solve those issues first and they maybe you'll start making some sales. Sorry to be so rude but you asked for advice.

WTF?! Does Yornz means anyway?!

 

The landing page should be very coherent and precise.
It should describe the benfits of the product.
There should be only a link to the affiliate product, not other links from articles or ezinearticles.

The Viewer needs to have only the choice to visit the affiliate product/products, you don't want to scatter him to ezine articles where you will possibly lose him. Don't leave the visitor with the choice to go elsewhere, without viewing the affiliate product

 

Yornz = Yawns?

 

yeah ive seen a few threads from you and you deffo need to think about a better domain name. and page design is a bit shabby.

maybe try a different product? if run your car on water isnt converting then move on.

 

I've never been exactly moved by the whole water gas thing, but you're focusing on features and you're supposed to focus on benefit.

I don't like this product and I don't think people should sell it but... just look at the header.

"Create your own water hybrid for under $150!"

That's a feature. WIIFM - What's in it for me? That's what the reader is thinking. You're mentioning a feature. It's like selling a book with the big headlines "Remarkable book with slick hardcover spine, paper pages and black ink font."

How about something a little more benefit oriented...

"Stick It To The Oil Companies... Use Water To Power Your Car For Free!"

At least than they know why they should give a crap about reading what comes next.

 

i would think now is not a good time to be getting into the run your car on water niche for two reasons ... one, it appears to be a declining market ... two, presuming you're new to this, you're better to focus on niches that are less competitive ... seems every man and his dog was in this niche, will take a lot of work to get on top of them ...

my 2c anyway