$40 to $70 logo / button contest

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Jacotus Brededin, Aug 28, 2008.

  1. designerboy

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    #21
    the dog-eating-homework logo remaked
    hope u like it
    if u can feedback pleas ;)
    [​IMG]
     
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  2. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #22
    It needs to convey the idea of "I did something wrong, I need an excuse". That was too generic.

    The button is the button that peoples are going to click to generate a new excuse. So, something 2 stages like the button by ASD.

    Check the website: www.randomexcusegenerator.com

    The logo and the button are to replace the existing ones.
     
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  3. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #23
    I like the concept of the shovel but it needs a bit more work. Maybe something with a character digging himself? Otherwise, I like the style.
     
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  4. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #24
    I like the idea for the logo but it needs a fair bit of work to look sleek. On the text side, the style used by designerboy is still my favorite. It's more cartoony.
     
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  5. designerboy

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    #25
    no feedback for me ? (#21)
     
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  6. Dan9872

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    #26
    [​IMG]

    If it's not any good its down to the wine. Feedback welcome.
     
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  7. Jacotus Brededin

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    #27
    Yeap, that's more like it. Maybe a bit more work on the dog expression (try to rotate the head a bit and work on the eyes) and adding a few bits of paper around like a made a real mess (or just modifying the piece of paper to make the damage more obvious).
     
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  8. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #28
    I was writing it when you posted ;)
     
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  9. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #29
    It doesn't convey the concept "I made a mistake / I need an excuse". It would need to be a bit more sleek too, especially on the text side.
     
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  10. designerboy

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    #30
    like this ?
    [​IMG]
     
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  11. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #31
    Yeap, that's more like it. I would move the 2 pieces of paper that are on the top to the bottom.
     
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  12. a4hire

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    #32
    Thanks for the feedback, I will update it and repost.
     
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    #33
    [​IMG]

    Hope you like it pm me :)
     
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  14. a4hire

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    #34
    An update on my logo idea and the button.

    [​IMG]
     
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  15. designerboy

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    #35
    [​IMG]
     
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  16. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #36
    It doesn't convey the concept "I made a mistake / I need an excuse". It would need to be a bit more sleek too.
     
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  17. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #37
    That's much better but it still need some work.
     
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  18. Jacotus Brededin

    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #38
    Yeap, that looks pretty good.
     
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    Jacotus Brededin Well-Known Member

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    #39
    FYI: I also received another PM submission
     
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  20. a4hire

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    #40
    Thank you. I will be glad to do anymore work on it. Have you any suggestions of what you think needs work or make it better?
     
    a4hire, Sep 2, 2008 IP