Hello guys I made a landing page yesterday. Since I just joined clickbank., I thought I should show it to you guys to see what you think? I am going to start promoting it in articles and other free sources. And the questions are: What do you think about it? & Is this landing page worth doing PPC on? http://www.ilostfat.info Thanks in advance!
Try to add Image Header, need to add some graphic for example the product banners etc. The page should be descriptive about the product on how it will help the buyer.
Looks way better. Just wondering why is the blogroll there ? Do you want to send your precious visitors to the links in the blogroll ? Image of the product or product box would be better.
Your blogroll sucks as of now. Focus on the task at hand and don't put all those unrelated links there. Atleast put links to health/fat loss resources.
you need to concerntrate on your pages first of all you should indicate the product which you are targeting . you can show it on header.and other wise your page is ok.
Always find a landing page from the guru online and try your best to model after them. this way you will have a higher chance of success. if too difficult then outsource to getafreelancer.
Looks like you used a WP theme and ripped the sidebar. It's still a 2 column design which is no good. You need to look around a lot at other landing pages first. It needs a lot of work.
But all the visitor needs to do is to be directed to the product's actual page. If they cant convince them, nothing can..!
Replace the Home link with Lose Your Weight Now or something similar! and replace Lose Your Weight Now! head with an image header with a link to the guide you promote. On the Sidebar you can add the Book Image of the product with a sentence bellow it. Finally remove Posted in Uncategorized | No Comments » at the footer. Good Luck