my first clickbank website

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by cri8bat, Aug 22, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi all

    this is my first clickbank website
    yornz(dot)com

    what do you think, any suggestion to improve it
    also one of my articles just got accepted from ezinearticles

    just want to make sure that I am on the right track and what else should I do to earn money from clickbank
     
    cri8bat, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  2. Sylar

    Sylar Banned

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    #2
    REMOVE THE GOOGLE ADS!!! TERRIBLE MISTAKE!!!! where do you think these ads lead to? Competitor webpages! is it worth losing a customer over a five cents click? Plus, ads on a salespage reduce the professionalism terribly.

    Try using a darker color than light blue if you plan on writing on light blue background..Currently its hard to read some text.

    Also, what kind of domain name is that? at least make it yornz.com/caronwater or register a new domain alltogether.

    What i can see is overall pretty nice for a first site. Maybe add a border around your main site because its somehow contrasting with the background.

    Hope that helps.

    -Syl
     
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  3. gang

    gang Peon

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    #3
    looks great, but where are your copyright, contact and privacy?
     
    gang, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  4. Tazer Dude

    Tazer Dude Active Member

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    I dont get the reasoning behind the domain name though....is that greek or some other language?
    Could'nt you find some run water on gas keywords...

    I agree with sylar get rid of adsense ads...Its a good looking site anyways...
     
    Tazer Dude, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  5. zxlewi

    zxlewi Banned

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    looks like a nice site but i would remove the google ads maybe change em to link to your other projects when you get em
     
    zxlewi, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  6. MadBox

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    Yeah, you should remove that Google ad.
     
    MadBox, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  7. mikiowoko

    mikiowoko Greenhorn

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    I went to your site, It looked OK. The google ad I clicked on, said that the car/water was a scam and click for something better.
    Here's where it sent me:
    www.howtosavegas123.com/Car+Run+on+Water.html

    P.M. me for more
     
    mikiowoko, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  8. ScoTech

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    I second that, don't waste your time and money with the Adsense, those ads all lead to someone else who will get your sale!
     
    ScoTech, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  9. HiddenCrimson

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    I have adblock on so I don't know if you have since removed the adsense. But to me the overall look of the website is decent. It could definitely use some work, but it is still pretty good.
     
    HiddenCrimson, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    #10


    ARE YOU FREAKIN' KIDDIN' ME ?!?
    LOL!!!!

    That was possibly the most pathetic attempt to get a water4gas sale.

    So you tell a lie that the link from his site took you to www.howtosavegas123.com/Car+Run+on+Water.html , which is your site... hoping that someone would purchase it?

    You hope that anyone would purchase that on this forum, If anyone was to purchase, they'd use their own aff. link

    [​IMG]
     
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  11. pcz

    pcz Well-Known Member

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    lol the lol pic :)
     
    pcz, Aug 23, 2008 IP
  12. terryd

    terryd Well-Known Member

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    I think you should get the phk out of here............lame ass attempt at making an affiliate commission which bombed seriously.......now that we know your a liar, good luck on making some business connections here :D
     
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  13. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    ?????? what do you mean I am a liar?
     
    cri8bat, Aug 23, 2008 IP
  14. ChrisJacobson

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    #14
    You need a better domain name. What the hell is yornz.com?

    It's all about SEO and with a bad name like that, it won't help your cause.
     
    ChrisJacobson, Aug 23, 2008 IP
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    wow, I thought the site was...okay...keep a light blue, no matter what anyone says...light blue relaxes the reader and makes them feel comfortable while reading your website...
    Your address should always have keywords, the name your using really won't help you...your going to spin your wheels on this one, believe me... you would be better off with a name like that you mize well make a squidoo lens or a blog, your probably going to have better luck..

    Good luck to you anyway :)
     
    bunch, Aug 23, 2008 IP
  16. mikiowoko

    mikiowoko Greenhorn

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    That is not my site. My point was that the adsense ad said "water/gas is a scam: click here. When you click you go to a site selling the same thing.
     
    mikiowoko, Aug 25, 2008 IP
  17. terryd

    terryd Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Apologies.......it must have been a bad day for me :

    I saw the thread topic and thought you were saying this was your first clickbank website as in YOUR product, not your first clickbank AFFILIATE website.........must have been a late night for me........:D

    Don't worry, I've smacked myself silly for the mistake :rolleyes:
     
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  18. bobbylove321

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    What's the point of the first page? It's useless. The first page should be your landing page where you CAPTURE peoples' names and emails, and once they sign up then send them to sales page. I also think you should try and make the site a bit more appealing. I don't like the youtube videos. It looks like your forcing the sale.

    Good start though.
     
    bobbylove321, Aug 25, 2008 IP
  19. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #19
    Well tkx for the tip
    as you see I am a newbie in this :)
    I saw your website on the signature looks very nice by the way :D

    I will put an email input to the users subscribe soon

    tkx again :)


     
    cri8bat, Aug 26, 2008 IP