Please review my Work in Progress

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by Clownfield, Aug 21, 2008.

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    I started working on this WordPress layout earlier today with hopes I could sell it sometime after it's completed. I know there's a huge white space in the middle, I'm working on it. :p

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    Oh yeah, the only reason I didn't link to it was because I'm not allowed.. :\
     
    Clownfield, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  2. adultwordpressthemes

    adultwordpressthemes Active Member

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    t looks ok overall, not to fond of the green liquid looking stuff.
     
    adultwordpressthemes, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  3. princessa

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    I really like it. It's different! Not sure about the text though, lol. Hopefully you'll include a logo PSD or something... I don't know of anyone who would want "Death lettuce" on their website lol.
     
    princessa, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    I like it. Ditto on the text font for the post and the menu items as well.

    Your feed icon is normally at the top of the sidebar or in the header area. Having it at the bottom of sidebar may obscure it as the sidebar grows in length, making it hard for people to find.

    Why mutant ninja rabbits would love death lettuce of course!
     
    Dodger, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    princessa Active Member

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    LOL true. I did just finish up a site design for one of those! :D
     
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    I like it minus the green liquid. It looks kind of out of date/unprofessional. That's just my opinion though.
     
    veckd, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    #7
    looks good. i personally think you can make it more jovial by adding more pictures and catchy phrases. More content will also do the trick. A few pictures (graphics, animations, icons) will make the site more user friendly.

    cheers
     
    gskesavan, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  8. Clownfield

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    Awesome, thanks for the advice. That's what I'm planning on doing in the white area.

    Removed.. :p

    Mutant ninja rabbits indeed, hah. Changed the feed icon location.. Thanks!


    The title is still in text format. There will be a PSD and I've changed the title to "Blog title."

    Removed.. :p
     
    Clownfield, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    I like the menu and overall layout, but I have to agree about the green goo...no offense but it looks like a cumshot.
     
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    A few more posts and you will be able to. What was the site again?
     
    Dodger, Aug 22, 2008 IP
  11. Clownfield

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    Lol I got to thinking the same thing... Here is an updated version:

    it's only imageshack... :confused:


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    Clownfield, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    It looks great now. I love the menu.
     
    veckd, Aug 22, 2008 IP