Please Review my Super Site?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by pnt_global, Aug 11, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi

    I have designed one site related to my loving country www.supersitepakistan.com

    Please suggest more, what can i do more for my web
     
    pnt_global, Aug 11, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    The site looks good, it has great content, it's very user friendly, and it's well designed.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  3. michaeldunbar

    michaeldunbar Peon

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    #3
    Make the page links part of the main text body on the first page to give them context. Also, change the text to say welcome not wel come.
     
    michaeldunbar, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  4. C.Whyte

    C.Whyte Peon

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    #4
    It's pretty nice. The images on the side seem a bit blurry, and it's always nice to see a custom favicon in the address bar (instead of the default red flower thing).
     
    C.Whyte, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  5. mikereen

    mikereen Peon

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    #5
    Not bad, but yeah take out the favicion even rather than have the default one
     
    mikereen, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  6. RoyDixon

    RoyDixon Peon

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    #6
    It looks pretty good. I like the banner alot.
     
    RoyDixon, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  7. talewins

    talewins Peon

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    #7
    I guess you have made some changes because right now you have an intensely beautiful site. The pictures are terrific, but it would be even better if they linked to larger pictures, or to more information about them.

    Your current WELCOME TO PAKISTAN introduction reads:
    The word “Pakistan” means “Land of the Pure” in Urdu and Persian language. In this blog, Razib Ahmed wrote two articles about Pakistan tourism: Pakistani Government trying for Tourism and Pakistan: Some tourist attractions. For the last few days, I have been writing about tourism in the South Asian countries. Here are twelve reasons why you should visit Pakistan:

    If you enjoy visiting the historical sites then I would say Pakistan is a must visit for you. This country bears the remains of the dawn of human civilization. Without seeing it, your knowledge of history would remain incomplete. The history of Pakistan can be traced back to 3000 B.C. The Indus valley civilization, stretching from Kashmir to the Arabian Sea is one of the first civilizations of the world and it included the area of the present day Pakistan. The two major centers of this civilization are: Harappa, on the bank of Ravi in Sahiwal district and Moenjo Daro, situated in the Larkana district.

    Modern day Pakistan consists of four major parts called provinces Sindh, Punjab, Balochistan and North-West Frontier Province. It also governs part of Kashmir which is currently split between Pakistan and India. The Indus region was the site of several ancient cultures including Mehrgarh, one of the world's earliest known towns, and the Indus Valley Civilization (2500 BCE - 1500 BCE) at Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro.[7]

    Waves of conquerors and migrants including Harappan, Indo-Aryan, Persian, Grecian, Saka, Parthian, Kushan, White Hun, Afghan, Arab, Turkics, and Mughal settled in the Indo-Gangetic plains throughout the centuries, influencing the locals and being absorbed among them. The modern state of Pakistan was established on 14 August 1947, but the region has an extensive history that overlaps with the histories of India, Afghanistan and Iran. The region is a crossroad of historic trade routes, including the Silk Road.

    What do you think about changing that copy to:
    The history of Pakistan can be traced all the way back to 3000 B.C. The Indus valley civilization, stretching from Kashmir to the Arabian Sea, cradled the first civilizations of the world. The two major centers of this civilization are: Harappa, found on the bank of Ravi in the Sahiwal district, and Moenjo Daro, situated in the Larkana district.

    Modern day Pakistan consists of four major parts called provinces Sindh, Punjab, Balochistan and North-West Frontier Province. It also governs part of Kashmir which is currently split between Pakistan and India. The Indus region was the site of several ancient cultures including Mehrgarh, one of the world's earliest known cities, and the Indus Valley Civilization (2500 BCE - 1500 BCE) at Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro.[7]

    Waves of conquerors and migrants including Harappan, Indo-Aryan, Persian, Grecian, Saka, Parthian, Kushan, White Hun, Afghan, Arab, Turkics, and Mughal settled in the Indo-Gangetic plains throughout the centuries, influencing the locals and being absorbed among them.
    Pakistan was established as an independent country on 14 August 1947. The region is a crossroad of historic trade routes, including the famous Silk Road.

    In the Urdu and Persian languages the word “Pakistan” means “Land of the Pure”. But the region has an extensive history overlapping the histories of India, Afghanistan and Iran. If you enjoy visiting ancient, historical sites then Pakistan is one of the most incredible and important countries you will ever visit. The very first dawn of human civilization began in Pakistan and you are invited to see it with your very own eyes, almost exactly the way it appeared many centuries ago.

    Best of luck to you, I will definitely be creating a link to your site from
    http://www.talewins.com/worldtravel/
     
    talewins, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  8. pnt_global

    pnt_global Peon

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    #8
    Hi
    Thanks for all of you guys! I am really happy with your comment.
     
    pnt_global, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  9. tendulkar2

    tendulkar2 Banned

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    #9
    it's simple and good.. But I didn't liked the left side pictures...
     
    tendulkar2, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  10. websites

    websites Peon

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    Hi,

    I like this,specially header & images
     
    websites, Aug 19, 2008 IP
  11. oym

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    #11
    its OK,....pictures are nice...really in Pakistan?
     
    oym, Aug 19, 2008 IP
  12. nepalsites

    nepalsites Peon

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    #12
    i felt the site is too simple right now. the banner is big and easily noticeable but the content are seems quite monotonous. you might want to add colors in the content section or put a menu section there as well. don't use all same text. use big text headings and small text for paragraphs...add few more headings.

    hope that helps :) good luck with the site.
     
    nepalsites, Aug 20, 2008 IP
  13. Minos

    Minos Peon

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    #13
    it is a simle nice site
    but some extra effort in the content
     
    Minos, Aug 20, 2008 IP
  14. vanko007a

    vanko007a Banned

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    #14
    Here's some design tips: change your footer - green is better than gray. Make your side borders bigger.

    Good luck to you sir.
     
    vanko007a, Aug 20, 2008 IP
  15. Matagascar

    Matagascar Well-Known Member

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    #15
    Love the images and the content. The content on the homepage is a great read! I suggest to remove the marquee :)
     
    Matagascar, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  16. pnt_global

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    Yes ! Really in Pakistan, you will find beautiful places in pakistan
     
    pnt_global, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  17. venn

    venn Peon

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    #17
    i suggest you use a picture rotator for your page header to be more attractive... google "javascript banner rotator" and put awesome pictures like those on the left column.
     
    venn, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  18. cerious22

    cerious22 Active Member

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    #18
    the site looks great. However the skewed pictures really seem to be distracting. maybe some java script having them enlarge when you rollover them would be cool. Good Job
     
    cerious22, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  19. findklik

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    I like the design, it is simple and clean. Keep up with your hard work.
     
    findklik, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  20. tarzan007

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    #20
    really nice site, but it would be great if you can avoid those google ads in the middle
    ads on sidebar are fine
     
    tarzan007, Aug 21, 2008 IP