Review - How to make you're own waterpipe

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Tom__, Aug 15, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I would like you guy's to review my small niche website "How to make you're own waterpipe/shisha/hookah" and also ask with it, is it legal to have google ads on a page that explains some tobacco.

    Also, what do you think about the explanation?

    Kindly regards :)
     
    Tom__, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  2. BuxP

    BuxP Notable Member

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    There shouldn't be any problems with google. The design is simple, but user friendly. I was tempted to read the content, even when my interest in water pipes is 0 lol.

    nice informative page.
     
    BuxP, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  3. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    The design does not look professional you should get a theme and a logo for the
    site.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 15, 2008 IP
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    The design works for what it is. I'm not sure about the ad being placed slap bang in the middle of the content - it's a little too distracting. Maybe move the banner to the top and have one of the thin link boxes in the middle?

    Also, the title should be "How to make your own waterpipe." You're is short for you are.
     
    bodger, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  5. Tom__

    Tom__ Peon

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    Ok, thanks for the tips, I've eddited the site a bit and why should I need a professional layout? It's a 1 page website were people just want a guide how to make their own waterpipe.
     
    Tom__, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    sideman Banned

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    You could use some pics.
     
    sideman, Aug 16, 2008 IP
  7. Tom__

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    How do you mean? Their are some example pictures, what should you need more?
     
    Tom__, Aug 16, 2008 IP