The eBook is now officially a Digital Take Over. www.YoungWealthRevolution.com I was a little lazy on the pitch, but I'm back from Vaca. and it's time to get this thing rollin. Check it out - Commission is about $34 paid to Affiliates The product price is only $54 ! www.YoungWealthRevolution.com It's converting with me through PPC at about 1:13...
Ouch that sales page is absolutely disgusting. No aesthetics what so ever and the text is all over the place.
Yeah right..! http://www.cb-analytics.com/product.php?id=MOREBANK Your product has 0 gravity... need some serious work on your sales page
Really ? I think the Pitch is perfect for anyone who is obviously looking to make more money, especially online. You think hiring a Copyrighter is the way to go ? Comments Please -
Uhh I think they are talking about the design overall. To me it looks like the same page I created when I first learned to create a link and put an image in...wayy too long ago. 21stcenturyplz
This is the same product that was voted as one of the worst sales pages that we had ever seen on D.P, that was before this version which has been improved but this version is still bad. Using free webs for you images.....classy.... Good luck making any sales the way it is now......
Thanks for the Tips...........Greatly appreciated I don't use Free Webs images, I host through Free Webs. You don't need any coding, and I am making money off each of my websites I have through Free Webs. Thanks - You know, there is alot of hype about my product, which is good because the more Energy that is given to my product the better.... Again Comments Appreciated -
See, I'm not being Ignorant...... I am really taking most comments as Constructive Critisism. See, I improve on everything I do..... so all comments that I feel are true, I learn from them and improve. No ignorance here "PopeDope"..... Just real Talk.
Your sales page is absolutely horrific! I do have to give you my compliments when it comes to the 3D merchandise. One of the few things that makes it convincing and not sooo amateurish.
YoungWealth, First of all, the joke that your program converts at 1:13 didn't help you credibility. In order to have some success: Hire a professional web/graphic designer with experience in designing sales pages, to make a professional looking sales page with appropriate banners and images. Find a experienced copywriter to write a professional sales page. Provide resources for affiliates, be honest to them, treat the affiliates right, and they will treat you right and make you sales
I got my graphics done professionally - it only cost me $200, but I thought it was a good Design. I am in the process of finding a copywriter, for the sales page. I just got a sale tonight, so I am going to see how the customer liked the product. I ask for feedback from the customer after they view the content, so I'll fill you all in when I get it. What's wrong with the Design ?? Any Recomendations .......
You told us that it converted at 1:13 so you should have a heap of customer testimonials by now surely so why do you need to wait to see if the customer liked the product .......that is of course unless you were trying to deceive us?
I think you've got too much white space on your salesletter. It's a bit awkward looking to me. Also your background image is just too ... much. I think a lighter background would be a good idea. I also think you should try getting some nice checkmarks for your bullet lists. You can find those online pretty easily. I do think that your product images look pretty good, that's a good start.
wow.... I think you should take your own course a few times... Good luck with it, next product try not to be so strong with your pitch here - the filter is thick and these progs come/go bi-weekly... N.