How Does My Landing Page Look?

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  1. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #21
    Sorry that it hurts your eyes but I wanted to be different. The ones you showed are just like everything on the net. (plain) it reminds me of the landing page of my ebook.
     
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    ~kev~ Well-Known Member

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    #22
    Much better, now a noob is more likely to understand what this is all about.

    PTC only needs to be defined once. You have it in the intro sentence, and the first sentence of the paragraph.

    Compare these two:

    What is a Paid To Click (PTC) Site?

    Which one sounds better and which one is easier to follow? Words should flow like a stream. They should be easy to read and blend together.

    Thank you for taking noobs into consideration.

    :)
     
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  3. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #23
    I do what to help everyone. After reading what you said, I seen that people that had no clue what PTC sites was would miss this advice to make easy money. I will keep all of this in mind when I write the ebook later this year.
     
    kush86, Aug 6, 2008 IP
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    firefix Active Member

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    #24
    Wouldnt be mad on your landing page. Its just no "wow" enough
     
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    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #25
    lol not wow enough
     
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    #26
    The look of the site is decent. I would try softening the colors a bit; for instance, make the black a dark gray and the white background a soft yellow or something. I think it's more aesthetically pleasing to have less contrast and more flow.

    As for the content I agree with the others that there should be some sort of explanation of what PPC is, what exactly you do to earn that money, etc.

    -AudieMurphy
     
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  7. kush86

    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #27
    The dark gray is a nice idea. Its PTC not PPC. You should learn what both are.

    PPC = Pay Per Click. Mostly affiliate marketers use adwords to drive traffic to their landing pages.

    PTC = Paid To Click. Users make money clicking ads.
     
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    #28
    Haha yeah. Thanks for the tip. :)
     
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    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #29
    you welcome
     
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    #30
    The look of your site doesn't matter as much as engaging visitors with compelling copy that sucks them in and makes them take action. Best of luck in reaching your goals!
     
    meister, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    casualmusic Active Member

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    #31
    that's one long page - you should pay more attention to design
     
    casualmusic, Aug 16, 2008 IP
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    #32
    Reeally bad choice of colours and graphics.
    You need to make it more eye-pleasing.
     
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    #33
    Ok, I like the thought of this, and I think I understand what I'm doing looking at your page, but the color contrast, while eyecatching is too much for easy reading for me.
    Suggestions only, take them as you will ;)
    Break this up into more pages:
    take a page, section it into what PTC is, what it's not, and how one does it.
    take a page, section it into what you are trying to do with PTC. Your goals and plan. Show a noob, (that would be me, or many of your readers) how to do this with your program. Inherent in your goals is getting more people to use your ptc places. (if that isn't part of it, explain more clearly why you want visitors to your site.)
    take a page, tell us who you are and why we would trust you enough to get involved in your program.
    take a page and list all the places that you are using to generate income
    take a page and summarize your income by listing only the sites that you make money with.
    Change out your color scheme to be less violent on the eyes. You don't have to make it all bland and $#%^, but there is a reason the big sites use black text on a white background and surround it with a soft color. It's easy to look at for hours on end.
    Read your text to yourself out loud before you commit it to the website. you will catch a bunch of syntax errors that will annoy you and therefore your readers.

    Ok, enough of the suggestions

    Good concept, good initial start. It's working as a program for you, although you have some contradictions at the end with regard to the profit. your numbers say minus but your text says you are making a small amount of profit. which is it?
    Overall nice first effort on this site... I know, it's been up a while now, but there's still work to be done.

    Hope this is a help.
     
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    #34
    I like the break down. You really took the time to give great advice.
     
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    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Did some big changes to the landing page.
     
    kush86, Aug 17, 2008 IP