new website pls. review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cri8bat, Aug 2, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi all just create a website from scratch need a review

    the url is on signature ("Master Cleanse")
     
    cri8bat, Aug 2, 2008 IP
  2. twizzlers

    twizzlers Peon

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    #2
    Nice - is this your very 1st site?

    Although the first thing I noticed is that the banner graphics are low quality - you might wanna replace those
     
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  3. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #3
    its not my first website, my first website was surfproxy.us this is my second one :)
    the header is not a low quality it is a mask of a lemoande jar :)
    tkx for the comments tho :)

    any more comments would be appreciated
     
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  4. twizzlers

    twizzlers Peon

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    #4
    I meant the 'Lemonade Recipe', "Lemonade products" part

    but otherwise, neat for only your 2nd site! I'm thinking of going into website making
     
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  5. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #5
    thank you :)

    yes I am thinking in going to web design :)


     
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    Wella Host Inc. Peon

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    #6
    That is a nice design... you should do some web design work.
     
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    #7
    Your site has a nice, inviting feel to it. Good luck with it.
     
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  8. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #8
    thank you guys for thouse lovely comments :)
    it encorrage me to do more and more websites :)

    cheers all
     
    cri8bat, Aug 3, 2008 IP
  9. Thomas_Horton

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    #9
    The right site is broken in IE8. But nice site and cool colors, it fits with your subject.
     
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    Sapphiro Well-Known Member

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    #10
    Not bad, but the quality can be definitely better. If you're saving the images in jpg (you should), do save it in 100% quality. :p
     
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    NaIdz Banned

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    #11
    this is for your own good:)

    my comment on your site is you need more quality picture or image on it.and maybe not too bright.hope this help;)
     
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    #12
    It has been said already but the quality on the graphics is pretty horrible. Also; the site doesn't feel very polished to be honest.
     
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    #13
    The design is good but you need higher quality of your images.

    Good luck.
     
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  14. welcomenew

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    #14
    Good job. Even though website it self doesn't work so well, but I'll love your work.
    Nice idea with header. But will be needed higher quality n I think you may need to change the bg color less bright.
    Good luck, cri8bat.
     
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  15. JDeVader

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    #15
    It's definitely a nice start! Here're a few suggestions.

    1. Change your image properties. Save with different parameters so they will look more crisp and clean.

    2. Make it legible. The text has a very nice color scheme to it, but it blends too much with the page. The navigation is a bit hard for me to read.

    3. Make sure all pages are working. Your links page has your holder text in it.

    All in all it's a nice looking site! I hope it makes you good money.
     
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  16. xops

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    #16
    It certainly looks lemony! :D
     
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    #17
    do you mean this one? http://www.lemonadedietnow.com/
    (cos you got three URL on your signature :)

    If that's the one, here's my opinion:

    "PLUS" THING:
    - EXCELLENT work with placing the adsense! I almost can't see the difference between the content and the ads! Great Job buddy!

    "MINUS" THING:
    - not enogh contrast on the header and menu, and titles. It took me a few seconds to read your subheading. Use a more contrast color, i.e if the background is dark, use lighter color for text, and so on.

    Good luck,
    Oki Trice
     
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  18. Dillmando

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    #18
    Not centered in FF3. I would just put the <center> and </center> code at the beginning and end of your code to make it look much better and as everyone said, maybe improve the images.
     
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  19. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #19
    You're right, I had to hunt to find the content - I thought it was all ads.

    Screams MFA

    Look under the hood and the javascript is old school where you should be using css or atleast a more uptodate image switcher. And the javascript should be cached.

    And finally - in many countries lemonade is what americans call sprite or 7up - and I doubt anyone lost weight drinking it!
     
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    #20
    Well first I would say site is generally ok. But you have to consider more about picture qualities. You have to blend pictures with background. The effect you have made for button is not attractive. So I think you have to play lot more time with photoshop to improve your graphic skills. Best Rdgs.
     
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