How Does My Landing Page Look?

Please tell me how you feel about my landing page.

I spent a little in photoshop and slap together the landing page.

Link: http://ptc.kushmoney.com

 

and the link to your landing page is ?

 

Sorry about that, added the link to the top post.

 

Everything is organized but the theme needs a revamp, it pricks my eye.
You should give another thought about the colors.

 

I thought the colors were fun. Maybe change the black background and white font?

 

Wan to add another to your list?

 

I am very selective on PTC sites I join. pm me and I will see.

 

Nice design
But IMO you must use tiny url to mask the referal link

 

I have two thoughts on your landing page:

The first will be that I agree with the above, you should use tinyurl or some other URL hider to hide the referral links. Hell there are multiple copies of that form of a script for cheap or free floating around the internet that you could install on a subdomain of your main site and run it straight off yours. If you went that route it'd be another 'feature' you could advertise from your site.

The second is the link pictures that you have listed. For a site like this you want to keep everything looking pretty much the same and while some of them have blue borders embedded in the picture itself, some do not. To keep everything looking the same I would suggest editing the default pictures that do not have a border to include it or remove it from the other links.

Other than that for a landing page it's straight forward and does a good job at delivering it's content. The future suggested e-book is a good idea to help encourage people to visit the sites (or continue to visit them in the future and sign up through your links. This could lead to adding testimonials if it works out for others who follow your e-book. While it's always easy to just generate them it's better if they are from a source that is creditable.) Possibly on top of that if you have any informational posts on PTC off of your main site a link to that post might be useful to add, though not necessary.

 

Looks good for a landing page.It gets the idea across and is clean.
Good luck with your goal.

 

Great design.

try to make your paragraph justified too.... especially the very first one. Good luck for your business.

 

Its not a referral link.

Again not a referral. I like the idea about the borders on each banner.

Thanks

Yeah, I was thinking about that. I will make it look more professional.

 

Update: I edited the landing page a lot. I added more PTC sites, I added my status, and added a banner code for people to grab. Let me know what you all think of my work.

 

Very nice concept, good use of colors. I don't really like the logo, but I think that is just me ,

Great Work!

 

thanks, I did the whole landing page myself. Design I did in photoshop, I coded the landing page, and I came up with all the content.

 

looks great ..... nice job

 

What exactly is your page about? Something called PTC???

In other words, you are targeting a highly focused nitch. If someone does not know what your site is about, what makes you think they will continue reading?

It would be nice if you defined what a "PTC" is. That way, if peoiple like myself land there, we would have a clue as to what you are talking about.

Also, proper grammar requires that an acronym be defined before it is used in a sentence or paragraph. At the very least change the opening sentence to something like:

This would help people understand just "what" your page is about. Because I do not understand what your doing, so I left.

 

well done

 

Thanks

Thanks for the advice

Thanks

 

Examples of good landing pages (colours etc)
http://hiddenshadow.info/wow/
http://hiddenshadow.info/traffic/

Sorry m8, but my eyes hurt when I look at your page