Please Comment on my Landing Page

Hi all.

Please comment on my landing page. I sell PC Game CD keys. Here is the Call of Duty 4 page. All tips appreciated

http://keezbay.com/products/Call-of-Duty-4-CD-Key.html

Thank you everyone.

 

Since the games are copyrighted, selling keys to people who download the game could be considered as promoting the practice.

As a result, Google will not allow you to bid on Adwords:

http://adwords.google.com/support/b...er=54816&policy_country=All&policy_lang=en_US

 

Looks okay when browsing though - the only line I don't like is "# We have plenty of happy customers.". Makes it sound like you have unhappy customers too.

 

Ok but what about the landing page?

 

Exactly. You might get away with it for a while but they will catch you. Plus, the company that owns the product may catch you since you'll be displaying your ad next to theirs.

 

I don't bid on the name of the game, only the game + "cd key".

Can we please stick on topic and provide some tips for my LP? Thx.

 

bad idea dude, try not to do anything illegal when it comes to business.

 

How ironic...Webbguru is now banned lol

 

Banned much like their adwords account for doing warez...LOL

 

wat is warez?

 

I like your landing page. Looks good and has a good layout.

Problem is, why would someone pay you for a CD-KEY when they can get them for free from any serial search engine, which is probably where you got your keys? Just a question to think about.

Are you kidding?

 

I had to look it up LOL

 

trishan, +rep for you. You made me laugh.

 

I get what you're doing, but if you're selling just the CD-key (is it legit) why don't you try ebay? I've bought a few legit CD-keys on ebay in my gaming days. Loved it.

Also, I don't mean to be annoying - maybe I just read on the web too much - but I find the writing on your LP too small, maybe it's just me (keep in mind not all web users know what ctrl+ does).

 

This is illegal.

 

No need to think about it, do we?