http://www.curegyno.com Is this the way it should look? What do you think about it? It's my first page, I'm sure there's room for improvement, so give me suggestions, tips, etc... My goal is to generate as many leads as possible, I'm already driving decent traffic to the page, I just want to make sure that the text and the layout are okay
it looks good to me, but then again i am far from being an expert. its a better niche than the give yourself man-boobs that i see as wel lol
Okay... not the best name squeeze in the world, lol. I'm just gonna be an asshole and say that first of all, your headline sucks. Try to make it interesting and mysterious, something that actually make people want to read. The images are good though, captures attention and makes it look legit. The text below that is way too small, increase the font size and move it somewhere else. You want your bullets there. Just have a line or two, then the bullets, then the opt in box, and then you can have some content, and even have the opt in box again. If you don't have enough content this is kind of weird looking though, lol. Finally, use a yellow background behind the opt in box, it's proven to boost conversions as well as changing the text on the submit button. Something like "Cure Your Man Boobs Today!" or like mine, "Free Instant Access" (people love instant) will definitely improve opt ins, it's the little things that count. Feel free to check out my squeeze page in my signature as well. Good luck!
Thank you for the comment, I want constructive criticism, this is my first squeeze page so I know that it is not perfect. I will follow your advice, I looked at your page I think it looks great and it's very straight to the point. Personally as I reader that's what I like, not much reading and BS, just straight to the point. Since I put the page running few hours ago I have around 40 hits and 8 subscribers, which is around 20% conversion I guess. I will make the appropriate adjustment and post the update on this thread
Also, doesn anyone have a clue why the aweber form doesn't show when the page is opened in Firefox and IExplore ? I opened it with Opera it was alright, but didn't work in Iexplore and Firefox, could you check in your browsers to see if it works correctly UPDATE: Aweber was having some problems, now the forms show in every browser
Okay.. I applied some of the changes, made the text a bit bigger, made the background of the form box yellow and put a big red FREE INSTANT ACCESS in the form box. This is how it looks now: http://www.curegyno.com This is how it looked before the changes: http://www.curegyno.com/old.html Is there any improvement?
The new one does look better. The small text was really hard to read. I think you should do some more work with the top graphics... maybe "frame" the pictures. I'd also put in a subtle background behind the main table. Also, that first pic looks photoshopped. Is it?
Thanks for the advice, I'm gonna put some work to it to tweak it even more. I don't really know, I got the pictures from the affiliate resources of the program tham I'm promoting via my mailing list. The first picture does not seem very realistic to me either, so I'm considering putting other more realistic before/after pictures
Okay I was bored lol. Instead of just trying to get my message across here... A picture says more than a thousand words, right? http://lemonarian.com/manboobs/ Just right click and "save page as" to download everything. Why the hell the form shows up twice, I don't know, lol, you're gonna have to edit that. I made up the headline on the spot, lol. You're gonna have to split test this stuff.
Thanks a lot man, There a few good people... and you're one of them The page looks great, I'm gonna fix the forms and upload in a few hours
I agree with Ripped. 1. Work on Headline 2. Move Bullet Points to between headline and opt-in form. 3. Add a Header and Footer Graphic 4. Re-label your input opt-in button. 5. Try to play off people's emotions more. The opt-in is pretty dry at the moment. Hope this helps.
Maybe she's interested, because she's tired of looking at her boyfriend's man boobies. LOL The improvements look good