Landing Page Advice - Does this look ok?

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by UltimateFreebies, Jul 9, 2008.

  1. Zander Boon

    Zander Boon Peon

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    #21
    Hi,

    Sorry to be a pedant, but there's a typo in the strapline for your best pick. It should be "... what you put in your body".

    It's not a biggie, but it ain't gonna HELP. :)

    Apart from that, I agree with what others have said, what you get when you land looks like a sales page.

    Good luck,
    Zander.
     
    Zander Boon, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  2. UltimateFreebies

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    #22
    Nada...Nothing....Zilch...

    Articles have received a lot of traffic, but yet still nothing. Getting a lot of hops to and no sales. I wrote a couple more that generated plenty of traffic, but no sales.

    Really, it's all just about trial and error. This is a niche that I wanted to tackle (I'm promoting about 4 different niches, including this one. The others have made sales). It's just something out of the ordinary for me, so I wanted a little challenge to see if I could pull anything off.

    I'm not going to push too hard on it. I'll probably use some other bum methods, tweak the landing page a little more and then move on.

    What are some successful landing pages that you guys know of for an example? I'm not looking for templates with graphics that say "Place header here" and "Insert catchy line here" - I mean real, live landing pages. I'm just trying to see what format I should follow.

    Thanks for all of the help/suggestions :)
     
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  3. lemonarian

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    #23
    Wait, what does forums have to do with article marketing? Are you referring to forum marketing?
     
    lemonarian, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  4. Lifelong

    Lifelong Banned

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    #24
    There is too much content on that page for the average buyer.
     
    Lifelong, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  5. UltimateFreebies

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    #25
    How would you suggest I do it? Just eliminate the blurb about each product and just have the review box there?
     
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  6. lemonarian

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    #26
    Heh, you have a lot to learn mate. One of my best converting landing pages (1:20) is about double or even 3 times as long as that...

    It's all about how targeted the traffic is.
     
    lemonarian, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  7. beikepangzi

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    #27
    Agreed. long sales letter do work for niche products. I used to think who would of buy these and there're a lot of ppl think the same way. However, the long sales letter can be powerful if you are the targeted reader. I could never imagine I bought something from those landing pages myself :p
     
    beikepangzi, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  8. beikepangzi

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    #28
    my bad. I don't have much experience with article marketing. Do you submit the articles to article directories and these articles backlink to the landing pages?
     
    beikepangzi, Jul 11, 2008 IP
  9. blaine78

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    #29
    Ultimatefreebies, I think you will do a lot better doing your own trial and error rather than getting stuck between the different opinions. Opinions on landing page tend to differ. I found out, the more you asked about the subject...the more confused you'll become trying to decide between all the different opinions.

    There will always be a set that will tell you...your landing page won't work, while the other set is saying its ok.
    Don't get stuck in that middle ground of being confused! Just do some trial and error, and let the results do all the talking!
     
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  10. megacontent

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    #30
    If you want live landing pages then look on this forum or go to clickbank, look for high-gravity items and then find their homepage. You should be able to see the ones that convert the most.
     
    megacontent, Jul 12, 2008 IP