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There are some mistakes The Web is perhaps the simplest and the most time-effective tool for sourcing the perfect food supplier and ensuring a timely delivery. Another benefit of buying food supplies via the internet is that you entrust the delivery to professionals – people who are passionate about food and know their business. The reception of a party or a banquet can be a little hectic if it is a very significant occasion and you want to make a good impression on your guests. It is another good reason of going online to buy grocery. You might think that obtaining food supplies online can be expensive. Considering the real costs of preparation of a banquet, you will find that asking a professional to help you, is the most reasonable solution to your party problems. This is just a quick overhaul. What is this text for? What are you gonna do with it?
I don't mean to be unkind, but... this is a mess. Unless you're looking for clients without much grasp of English, this wouldn't be acceptable to anybody. It just doesn't make sense. While there's no shame in writing imperfect English, you can't really expect to sell it to anybody... because it's not effective content. My advice? Work on your English fluency for awhile, then take another shot at it. Because as of now, it's full of mistakes-- both in basic grammar and general readability. These are not the kinds of mistakes that somebody can tell you how to fix. They're the kinds of mistakes you'll need to develop an instinct for-- and that instinct only comes from practice and fluency. English is hard! Good luck to you. -Karen
I think you're missed the most important thing here ---> The comma. You can't just joined all the words together without even a single comma...
Thanks Tankard ,Karen and wilhb for the answer I don't want to write articles for clients ,I only want to create some decent articles for few my sites. Are you think that I can write decent articles for my sites or I must hire some good copywriter.
I guess it is a thesaurized version of some original which is not done to even 20% perfection. Sorry but reads horrible dear. Just not getting what is being conveyed in the write up. Hey man! Are you up to any article rewrite tool development .....if so sorry it too needs to be reworked...best wishes !!
At this stage definitely go and hire a good copywriter. Your text was a mystery even for a native English speaker. BUT! You must make yourself a promise to learn English. It is easy and it is achievable. Read some good classic British authors. Watch English TV channels - it will give you the basics. Don't try to learn the language on the internet - majority of online people use very bad language
Thanks tankard I will try to learn English better.How much time do you think I must spending in learning English,that I can write some decent article (five month ,one year... maybe 3 years)
RDesign that would be hard for those of use who have spoken it all of our lives to estimate. Perhaps some of the other members for whom English is a second language could add their opinion. But I think by comparison, English is one tough and inconsistent language.
I do agree with you, I could hardly read beyond the first line because of the mess and no sense. Practice makes perfect so keep trying and learning on a daily basis
If you can get your hands on some good books, that will motivate you greatly on your path to learn English. Kids learn by reading regularly so why shouldn't it be the same for adults. Good luck RDesign!
Well, there are lots of Polish workers around, where I live. They are great chaps and trying their best to speak English, and usually their pronunciation is even better than that of some local speakers . If you are determined, I think you can improve your English to write basic articles within 6 months or so. You just have to devote time to your lessons regularly.
Well - here's one question I am qualified to answer, as I am an English teacher, (English to Speakers of Other Languages). I am happy to say that you are already on the right track - communicating on an English language forum, and asking people's opinion about your writing. Here are some tips: English language classes one-to-one lesssons (bit expensive though) reading in English as much as possible - newspapers, novels, etc language exchange (this is a way of getting one-to-one on the cheap, and the other person learns your language) watch movies/tv in English listen to English radio - eg: World Service take a look at websites such as the BBC languages site write as much as possible in English, and try to get feedback Good Luck!
Sorry to be rude, but better to hire a professional writer. See you have made a mistake right in the intro of the thread. Add my 2 cents.
Could be never. Knowing English doesn't mean you can write for crap. Writing is an art. The USA, for instance, is filled with millions of people who know English perfectly, but can't write good articles. Of course, if we're talking SEO articles (low-level writing), then you just need to know English a little bit as those aren't "art" at all, just labor. If your English and writing ability are at a high school level, you're set. Good luck with it.