How is this Landing Page?

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    woofytalk, Jun 11, 2008 IP
  2. Sem-Advance

    Sem-Advance Notable Member

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    Looks good......I have no design skills so any comments would probably be useless....
     
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  3. coder999

    coder999 Banned

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    umm.... Not bad :) I'm not successes with landing pages :(
     
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    Wayne Liew Banned

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    You will need price tags dude. Even if it is free, you need to show the word FREE! When I first went to the page, the first question that pops up will be how much would this costs me. Also, a description of problems regarding the problems faced by visitors in bullet form would be great. :)
     
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    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    #5
    You have made 3 reviews of 3 different products and all of them have 5 stars,
    wouldn't it be better to put the product you preffered with 5 stars, give the second one 4.5 stars, and give the third one 3 stars, so that the user will know to click the 5 star one. I'm no expert tho, this is just my thought.
    Because if you see 3 products all with 5 star ratings wouldn't you get confused, and hesitant of which want to click?
     
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    madmik85 Peon

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    Hey,
    I would recommend adding numerical stats in the ratings and choosing 1 product as the best of all and saying why it is the best. but overall, it looks very good :).

    good luck
     
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    anarmyofme Well-Known Member

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    Interesting...
    This is the second thread started about Man Boobs landing pages. Duplicate accounts maybe?
     
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    I'm by no means an expert, but from what i've read here you may want to cloak your hoplinks.
     
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  9. woofytalk

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    No, not a duplicate account. I just saw the previous thread and because that person's landing page was so much simpler and to the point, I thought I'd get some opinions on mine.

    My biggest concern is that my landing page is too much. But at the same time, I want to sweet talk and pre-sell the visitor.

    Wanted to see what you guys thought.

    Thanks
    Jay
     
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    megarudy Active Member

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    I agree. Also remember to tell them why this product is better than the others.
     
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