how to say it simply?

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by 3dcgmodel, May 10, 2008.

0
  1. #1
    "if you buy two bags or more, you can choose free shipping option "

    how to say it simply?

    "free shipping option two bags or more" . is it ok?


    Please note:
    I wanna pay to write good copywrite for my site, a B2C shopping site, sell bag and cloth. Please post here or pm me. Experience sem/writer only.
     
    3dcgmodel, May 10, 2008 IP
  2. ruffneck119

    ruffneck119 Active Member

    Messages:
    1,082
    Likes Received:
    14
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    80
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 1
    #2
    Free Shipping! When You Buy Two Bags Or More!

    I did it in all caps and it messed up.... look at my last post.
     
    ruffneck119, May 10, 2008 IP
  3. fibula

    fibula Peon

    Messages:
    235
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #3
    "shipping free on purchase of two bags or more"

    hope that helps
     
    fibula, May 10, 2008 IP
  4. danish muzaffar

    danish muzaffar Banned

    Messages:
    1,752
    Likes Received:
    296
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #4
    "choose free shipping option on buying two bags or more"

    howz that
     
    danish muzaffar, May 10, 2008 IP
  5. Seasidewriter

    Seasidewriter Peon

    Messages:
    140
    Likes Received:
    4
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #5
    Buy two bags or more, and shipping is free!
     
    Seasidewriter, May 10, 2008 IP
  6. coder999

    coder999 Banned

    Messages:
    727
    Likes Received:
    16
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #6
    Free shipping if you buy two or more
     
    coder999, May 10, 2008 IP
  7. GAMER456

    GAMER456 Peon

    Messages:
    27
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #7
    Free shipping available with a purchase of two bags or more. Like that one?
     
    GAMER456, May 10, 2008 IP
  8. sb123

    sb123 Active Member

    Messages:
    228
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    60
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #8
    FREE shipping on over 1 bag purchase!
     
    sb123, May 10, 2008 IP
  9. sb123

    sb123 Active Member

    Messages:
    228
    Likes Received:
    5
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    60
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #9
    FREE shipping option with every additional purchase!

    FREE shipping with every additional purchase!

    ==================================
    (If your sales page mentions only bags and there is a different sales page for cloth)
     
    sb123, May 10, 2008 IP
  10. ruffneck119

    ruffneck119 Active Member

    Messages:
    1,082
    Likes Received:
    14
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    80
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 1
    #10
    This is kind of funny... LOL

    Do it like this: "FREE SHIPPING! When you purchase two bags or more."

    This will catch a persons eye the best and it's simple and not confusing.

    If you are making a graphic make the "free shipping" big on top and the "When you purchase two bags or more." on the bottom in smaller text.

    You want their attention.

    -ruff
     
    ruffneck119, May 10, 2008 IP
  11. techfired

    techfired Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    115
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #11
    Get two, shipped to you.
     
    techfired, May 10, 2008 IP
  12. vgal

    vgal Active Member

    Messages:
    873
    Likes Received:
    22
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    60
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 3
    #12
    Take advantage of our free shipping when you purchase two or more!
     
    vgal, May 10, 2008 IP
  13. rayza

    rayza Peon

    Messages:
    35
    Likes Received:
    0
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #13
    Get FREE SHIPPING with two or more purchases of bags!
     
    rayza, May 10, 2008 IP
  14. go85

    go85 Active Member

    Messages:
    662
    Likes Received:
    22
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    60
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #14
    -No Shipping Charge When You Order Two Bags Or More!

    -Free Shipping On Orders Of Two Bags Or More!

    -Free Shipping Available On Orders Of Two Bags Or More!

    -Shipping Is Free On Orders Of Two Or More Bags!

    -Do You Want Free Shipping? Just Order Two Or More Bags!

    -When You Order Two Bags You Can Make Fun Of The People That Only Ordered One, Because They Won't Get Free Shipping!

    -Free Shipping On Multiple Bag Purchases!

    -Free Shipping On Multi-Bag Purchases!

    -Free Shipping On Purchases Of More Than One Bag!
     
    go85, May 10, 2008 IP
  15. 3dcgmodel

    3dcgmodel Banned

    Messages:
    655
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #15
    Thanks. I appreciate every answer. I just think it, but it seem a bit long.
    - No pay shipping fee when you buy two bags or more
     
    3dcgmodel, May 11, 2008 IP
  16. Dondon2d

    Dondon2d Peon

    Messages:
    3,193
    Likes Received:
    146
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #16
    Kinda wrong grammar, don't you think?
     
    Dondon2d, May 11, 2008 IP
  17. Analyst

    Analyst Well-Known Member

    Messages:
    623
    Likes Received:
    17
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    155
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #17
    ---> FREE Shipping on more than two purchases!
    ---> Buy Two & Get Shipping Free
    ---> SHIPPING ABSOLUTELY FREE: On Two or more purchases!
    ---> Buy two or more bags and we'll ship them for FREE
     
    Analyst, May 11, 2008 IP
  18. Lemon116

    Lemon116 Active Member

    Messages:
    1,245
    Likes Received:
    38
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    90
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #18
    FREE SHIPPING*

    *On two or more purchases
     
    Lemon116, May 11, 2008 IP
  19. ruffneck119

    ruffneck119 Active Member

    Messages:
    1,082
    Likes Received:
    14
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    80
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 1
    #19
    I still think this is funny :p

    But, honestly would you show us where this text is going to be placed?
     
    ruffneck119, May 11, 2008 IP
  20. 3dcgmodel

    3dcgmodel Banned

    Messages:
    655
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    As Seller:
    100% - 0
    As Buyer:
    100% - 0
    #20
    This text will be placed header area of my site. That is call sale messages.
     
    3dcgmodel, May 11, 2008 IP