please review the design

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    blazintigga, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  2. river

    river Active Member

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    there are three thing I would change.

    1. use a font for the logo that is more readable.

    2. make it so you don't have to scroll to see the pay pal buttons or the entire google ad.

    3. the graphic with the car is way too small and your visitors won't know what it is sicne they can't read it.

    Good Luck
     
    river, Mar 18, 2008 IP
  3. LifeNearPhilly

    LifeNearPhilly Peon

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    There seems to be a problem with links on the site...they all look like they have a line through the words instead of under them, and can't click on anything...
     
    LifeNearPhilly, Mar 18, 2008 IP
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    Qura-tul-Ain Active Member

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    I would say, colours are good and as per the concept of the site. Rest, it might need to be checked again for errors like strike through fonts and fonts in different colours etc.
     
    Qura-tul-Ain, Mar 18, 2008 IP
  5. blazintigga

    blazintigga Guest

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    oh okayy thanks for ratingg!!

    strikethrough was by purpose though! will change!
     
    blazintigga, Mar 20, 2008 IP
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    Vidieoh.com Peon

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    VERY nice site. Looks very 2.0ish haha if thats a term. Nice colors and nice lady. ha-ha i really enjoyed the site.
     
    Vidieoh.com, Mar 20, 2008 IP
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    I like the layout and the colors, nice site.
     
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  8. blazintigga

    blazintigga Guest

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    thanks!! :D
     
    blazintigga, Mar 21, 2008 IP
  9. Anna jones

    Anna jones Banned

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    #9
    There are many changes to be made to enhance the site design.

    1. Make the car banner and the content more visible and readable
    2. I suggest you to remove the lady picture and add some technical pictures there. I feel the picture of the lady is irrelevant to the concept of the site.
     
    Anna jones, Mar 21, 2008 IP
  10. skywalkerph

    skywalkerph Well-Known Member

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    this is my comments:

    1. i dont like the font type used in the logo "Kumar Radio" (top of text "2008" and speaker). It is not readable by human eye.
    2. I will change the change or remove the lady in the header. i will change it to related graphic.
    3. i will suggest to remove the Iframe. coz i heard that using Iframe is not good in seo.

    that's all hope it will help :)
     
    skywalkerph, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  11. BonnieG

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    I like:

    • The color scheme

    I would change:

    • The font used on top of the speakers.
    • The lady picture and add other photos underneath the links that match more of what the link will lead to.
    • Remove the word SUPPORT under the speakers and over the Google ads, as it is deceiving -- it should read "Advertisements".
    • Remove all the INLINE pages to get rid of the scroll bars.
    • Put the PayPal donation graphic on the left hand side (under Google ads) where it can be more visible and encourage donations.
    • I would make the flyer into a PDF and make it full size so readers can actually read the text.

    I would add:

    • An about me or an about this site page (why does it exist?)
    • A subscribe box to offer a way for you to build relationships
    • Physical location information (especially if you want to do business)
    • A feedback form

    All good things,
    Bonnie
     
    BonnieG, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  12. blazintigga

    blazintigga Guest

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    thank you both to skywalkerph and BonnieG

    this will make my site better!
     
    blazintigga, Mar 22, 2008 IP
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    #13
    Very red isn't it... maybe add some other colours in there. Remove the scrolls for the ads too - very amateur looking :p
     
    BernardBlack, Mar 22, 2008 IP
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    #14
    nice header, you need more work on fonts, colors/content.
     
    gibex, Mar 23, 2008 IP
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    You need to work on those iframes, the iframe borders must go and the iframe in iframe doesn't look good
     
    mman, Mar 23, 2008 IP
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    I think the iframes should be fixed. Make it look like it really part of the page.
     
    googlerankmaniac, Mar 23, 2008 IP
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    ziya Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Nice color scheme, and nice lady..

    it feels dating website, with a girl picture there hehe
     
    ziya, Mar 23, 2008 IP
  18. blazintigga

    blazintigga Guest

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    #18
    thanks for the comments!
     
    blazintigga, Mar 23, 2008 IP
  19. BonnieG

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    #19
    You are very welcome. :)

    However, there is one more page I would add:

    • A sitemap.

    A sitemap page will:

    1. Connect to all the other pages available at your website.
      The web sitemap is a "road map" around your website. Don't make people guess what pages would be interesting, - LEAD them!

    2. Describe to visitors what each page offers (what's in it for them?)
      This will definitely help people understand which pages apply to their needs and which ones do not. The point is, if you can prevent people from wasting time on your site visiting inappropriate pages, they'll spend more time at your site visiting the pages that provide education and entertainment or the solutions they want.

    3. Provide Google information about your site, including URLs that may not be discoverable by Google's normal crawling process.

    You can create an XML sitemap, through Google's free service, here:
    http://www.xml-sitemaps.com

    Good luck with your changes!


    All good things,
    Bonnie
     
    BonnieG, Mar 24, 2008 IP
  20. blazintigga

    blazintigga Guest

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    thanks for your opinions!
     
    blazintigga, Mar 29, 2008 IP