I nead help of native English speaker

Discussion in 'Websites' started by webblab, Mar 17, 2008.

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    Hello, guys!
    I need help to correct my English on the website just to make sure English makes sense.

    If you noticed grammar or linguistic mistakes, please let me know.
    Thanks in advance.
     
    webblab, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  2. amanamission

    amanamission Notable Member

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    Webblab is an online portfolio of Tallinn based freelance designer.-->Webblab is the online portfolio of a Tallin-based freelance designer

    What is Tallin? A place? A design environment? Unless your visitors know, better explain this.

    If it is a place, "A designer based in Tallinn, (Country)" is better.

    If it is a design environment, "A designer proficient in advanced Tallinn software."

    Having a design company name would seem more professional.

    The "double B" seems a little unfortunate, English readers will split that as "web blab"
     
    amanamission, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  3. webblab

    webblab Guest

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    Done!!

    Thanks for suggestions
     
    webblab, Mar 17, 2008 IP