Review My Site Please

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  1. F--K

    F--K Well-Known Member

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    #21
    it was really very simple and booring it needs work mate . work on graphics to attract users and work on contents too nso that users may stay and enjoy
     
    F--K, Mar 4, 2008 IP
  2. lonelyprince

    lonelyprince Active Member

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    #22
    Nice And Simple Job..
     
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  3. sheryl

    sheryl Peon

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    #23
    I had the fonts that size in order to prepare to put adsense ads on it. I was trying to have the font the same sizes as the adsense ads.

     
    sheryl, Mar 4, 2008 IP
  4. sheryl

    sheryl Peon

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    #24
    A very good suggestion, Im going to work on that today.

     
    sheryl, Mar 6, 2008 IP
  5. krome

    krome Banned

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    #25
    Decent site and loads fast. How did you get a PR5 so soon?
     
    krome, Mar 10, 2008 IP
  6. Bblogger

    Bblogger Peon

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    #26
    Site looks too simple, try to put a structured layout. Look for a designer of your budget and redesign the site. Honestly, that's what I think.
    All the best.
     
    Bblogger, Mar 11, 2008 IP
  7. sheryl

    sheryl Peon

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    #27
    Thank you for the compliments. I am considering starting a post on my PR5 website within only 2 months.

     
    sheryl, Mar 13, 2008 IP
  8. camp185

    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    #28
    Work on creating a clearly defined menu so visitors know how to navigate your site, use the same kind of font, and if you are going for simple, kill the black sidebars.

    When I first looked at your site I saw this, "Adware Spyware and Malware". I first thought I was on one of those sites. I would also work on creating a clear introduction message for you site. Lots of work to do....
     
    camp185, Mar 13, 2008 IP
  9. sheryl

    sheryl Peon

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    #29
    I didn't understand your statement about one of those sites. What are the kind of sites you were refering to? The site is simple but it is mainly there for information and a guide.
    I like your opinion about a clear introduction message and will write one.

     
    sheryl, Mar 15, 2008 IP
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    #30
    I was referring to the only site listed in your first post of this thread. The one you requested the review for: www.adwareremovaltools.com

    Your menu barely represents itself as a menu, text is to far spaced out.

    Here is a big yikes I also noticed. Did you know the title of your page is "Adware"? Unless it is adware, I would strongly suggest changing that.

     
    camp185, Mar 15, 2008 IP
  11. acer07

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    #31
    Very simple but fast and to the point. To keep it simple, I would ads a border around the main content.

    Are you going to let us in on the big secret? "How did you get a 5 Page Rank in only 2 months?"
     
    acer07, Mar 17, 2008 IP
  12. gerritpoel

    gerritpoel Active Member

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    #32
    good idea, however i think this is a little plain!
     
    gerritpoel, Mar 18, 2008 IP
  13. mfwl

    mfwl Well-Known Member

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    #33
    Content good. Layout poor. There was nothing to make me want to drive any depth into your site sorry. You need colour, a clear menu area, a bullet pointed content page and a lot more fluidity.

    Start with a free template if you are lacking in experience. You will win over 100% more visits.

    Sorry for the negative vibe but I think you need to start again with the layout as a must.

    Hope this was a little contructive. Will check back!

    Matt
     
    mfwl, Mar 18, 2008 IP
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    woofer Banned

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    #34
    Cool and simple
     
    woofer, Mar 18, 2008 IP
  15. sheryl

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    #35
    I agree that the design is very plain, however I am looking into some other designs.

     
    sheryl, Mar 21, 2008 IP
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    DjChugg Active Member

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    #36
    i think its too simple, try adding some graphics
     
    DjChugg, Mar 21, 2008 IP
  17. sheryl

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    #37
    I agree that the layout is not good. I am try to use WordPress but I can't get the hang of operating it.

    I was hoping that content would help make someone want to drive some depth into the site.

    Thanks for your advice, like I said, you don't have to worry about hurting my feelings. I enjoy the feedback to help me make it better.

     
    sheryl, Mar 24, 2008 IP
  18. sheryl

    sheryl Peon

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    #38
    I have made a few changes. I know the site is in need of more improvement, but I want to be sure of each little change before I make it.
    Step by step, little by little, until near perfect.
    What do you think of the little changes I've made.

     
    sheryl, Mar 26, 2008 IP
  19. krome

    krome Banned

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    #39
    I thought Id drop back in and see have you made changes. Its still simple with some improvements. I always like simple over too many graphics and hard to navigate sites.
     
    krome, Mar 27, 2008 IP
  20. acer07

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    #40
    Nice improvement. Still simple but good.
     
    acer07, Mar 31, 2008 IP