Hows this Template look?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ardit217@gmail.com, Feb 7, 2008.

  1. #1
    Its for my fathers family restaurant, Its called oakville pizza.

    I had soo much trouble on this one

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    Please tell me what you think, any suggestions are appreciated.

    thanks in advance
     
    ardit217@gmail.com, Feb 7, 2008 IP
  2. dman_2007

    dman_2007 Peon

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    #2
    It looks pretty good, well done. Now put it into action and create the website.
     
    dman_2007, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  3. swedal

    swedal Notable Member

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    #3
    Design looks good - it would be nice to see with the content.

    But if pizza is family dining at is finest in Oakville they need to seriously get a few nice restaurants.
     
    swedal, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  4. ardit217@gmail.com

    ardit217@gmail.com Well-Known Member

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    hahaha, thanks.

    The place has Italian dinners since its an italian restaraunt, people just know us as oakville pizza
     
    ardit217@gmail.com, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  5. jezzz

    jezzz Notable Member

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    #5
    Not look like Professional :(
     
    jezzz, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  6. ardit217@gmail.com

    ardit217@gmail.com Well-Known Member

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    to tell you the truth i wasent liking it too much either
     
    ardit217@gmail.com, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  7. tm1978

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    #7
    the colours are OK, but the fonts used are not appropriate. And where is the pizza (image on header)?
     
    tm1978, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  8. Proximity

    Proximity Banned

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    The colors are just ok, but it could be better. Other than that its good!
     
    Proximity, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  9. mgrohan

    mgrohan Active Member

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    #9
    A bit plain and bland. I think you could have a more lively heading with picture of the restaurant or pizzas etc.

    Also should read "Family Dining at its Finest", not "Family Dining Ats Its Finest" as it is currently written.
     
    mgrohan, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  10. ardit217@gmail.com

    ardit217@gmail.com Well-Known Member

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    lol, its not just pizza that we serve

    Thanks for the input!

    Thanks, for the input, and good catch:D
     
    ardit217@gmail.com, Feb 8, 2008 IP
  11. Apples

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    There are so many nice ready made templates available, just wondering why you wouldn't want to start with one of those?
     
    Apples, Feb 9, 2008 IP
  12. hello_welcome

    hello_welcome Well-Known Member

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    #12
    its looking nice but i can help you to improve it
     
    hello_welcome, Feb 25, 2008 IP