Hi all! I'd just like to get some technique about my review technique. Just to introduce myself, I have a forum/blog and one of the features is that I review 'new' blogs for free. I'll include a couple of reviews I have written below - could you tell me what you think of the content and style please? BuyMeAFerrari.co.uk Review FreelancingTips.com Review Thanks!
Break it up some. It's got that "sea of type" feeling that makes me click the close button. I think it's beneficial to used lots of subheads to make the reading easier and highlight the page for the reader--particularly on a website. Just my 2 cents.
I agree. It feels too bland. Two ways to break up segments are: Subhead text text text OR This is my subhead. This is the continuation of text. Also, add padding (or margin) to that picture. Try 10 pixels. It might be over the top, but I'd like to see a sidebar with "quick facts." You could also throw in bullet points too (if the article warrants).
Ok, cheers for the suggestions guys, will implement them later on today when I'm working on the forum
In regards to the posts image (Red Ferrari), I would suggest using the horizontal/vertical space option in WP image editor (ex.5px,5px) to make it cleaner. Just my thought
Thanks for your comment! Spacing has been used but the problem is that it is only working in IE and not Firefox, it's something we're trying to resolve.