Review My new site please?

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  2. HiredAtHome

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    It looks like fine from an Adsense compliance standpoint. However, I would alter the colors of the adsense blocks to better fit the site's color scheme. Beyond that, since you can't change Adsense font size, etc., I would work to make the site's text closer to the Adsense default font size and face.

    For layout, it's definitely very basic. The navigation bar on the left is almost impossible to read (on my monitor, anyway 1600X1200). I would make fixing that a priority.

    H@H
     
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    Barely see the navigation dan the site is very slow.

    Adsense.. Match theme does not look good. make more appearance for Adsense.

    May add a 728x15 link at the bottom.
     
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    b4db0y Notable Member

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    gr8 design but make the font of the nav panel a little large
     
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    Design definitly needs a bit of work. A more new age design with some glossy effects would look good. That navigation bar is nearly impossible to read :(
     
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    Horrible looking site, sorry. Change the look and add some content. IMO google will see this as a MFA site and ban you.
     
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    The design is not really for me, but the left column and the text in there needs to be modified. the text does not fit in the column and is too small to easily read.
     
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  8. joey112

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    Whats an MFA site? and how on earth is it that?
     
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    I'm not too fancy with the colors there..be better if you use other good free themes out there?

    The AdSense's colouring should match with the rest of your site (background, link color, etc)
    The navigation bar on the left is hardly readable

    Nice try though! Keep polishing!
     
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    not ok for me,i think u need more template or design.
     
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    The template is simple... but AdSense is very good for your site :) Great Job man.
     
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    #12
    Why did you make two review request for the same site. Ok it's not the same content, but it all looks the same :confused:

    CTRL C / CTRL V:
    Website is too width, you should make it centered. You should remove the bold on main text and change the menu text since it's way too small. The site is very boring, you should add some pictures to cheer it up. And I personally hate it when I click the "e-mail" link and my computer almost freezes up because outlook is starting up and I don't use outlook which makes it a waste. I would rather make a contact page. Or a page listing your e-mails.

    Good luck
     
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  13. joey112

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    Yeh mate im with ixwebhosting. And i can't programme or design a site without the help of sitestudio. So i want to use a template from like freetemplate(dot)com, but i simply don't know how to implement it.

    So my hands are tied with themes like these.
     
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    Difficult to read left menu. Title is centered, but banner ad and content is not.
     
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    Okay well i have 8 pages on the site. ? Is that enough. Allowed by adsense?

    I just fixed all the grammar then?

    ?
     
    joey112, Jan 17, 2008 IP
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    Undoubtedly a great effort...:)

    But I guess the font size and color can be modified. The font could be made smaller and should be in colors. You must add graphics so to arouse visitor's interest..too much of text makes it boring :(
     
    Tatiana1211, Jan 18, 2008 IP
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    the menu is very hard to read... letters are too small... Actually I would change it
     
    Markas, Jan 18, 2008 IP
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    Sorry to say. I find the design poor. Try changing it. There are many free templates available. Try one of them.
     
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    Im not to sure how to implement free templates though. I know next to nothing programming or anything. I know a lot about adsense and SEO and thats just about it.
     
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    #20
    A different color scheme is needed and the plain text -with nothing else- makes everything feel a bit boring.Do a google search on using free templates...if you were able to learn enough to get this far,then surely you can figure out template changing. Trust your own natural learning abilities.
     
    infopage, Jan 18, 2008 IP