Review mY health and beauty banner

Review My banner and give suggestions how i can improve it ? What mistakes i have done?

Is #666666 color for description is ok or in which color do i need to change it?

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slowdown the frame changing rate . makes it quiet very tough to read a present i feel .

 

Yes slow the frame rate down to about a count 1001,1002, change on about 1003 have it switch to another ad.

 

Thx for ur comments any other suggestion?

 

frame changes are very discrete, make the animation a little more smooth..increasing the no of frames can be helpful...

 

increase frames and try separate text and color animation.

 

It is still too fast to read. The banners are nice and the messages are good but it is very annoying trying read them. A possible client must be relaxed when entering your site

 

I'm not sure about the color palette for a banner that is targeted at getting women to click it for beauty and makeover tips. Then again, I'm not female so I wouldn't be the target audience.

 

Now ppl r more aware and males also think about beauty.

 

i like your banner !

nice job

 

thanks for ur comments

 

the graphics and text look great, but i agree that the transitions should be a lot slower so people can read the info

 

I love the ads colors and the differnt mix of Photos with each design. The only thing I would say is to slow down the transitions of the frames as they said above. Great job on it!
Maemae

 

It looks great. Obviously, the frame rate needs to be X2

 

Guys think about beauty? Maybe, but they don't call it that. Just make sure you pick a very specific target market and go after it. Don't try to reach everyone with every ad.

 

Hey ! i am not trying to reach male audience but i can't block them for viewing my web. Sure more females will be my user.