Vector guitars.

Well i just started using adobe illustrator a few days ago, ive had some experience with it before but not much so you could say this is my first time using it. I made a few vector guitars, could you please take a look and critique:





Thanks for taking some time out of your day to take a look.

 

The second one would look nicer with more details.

The first one is okay but I think the curves are a bit sudden. Also, try playing with shading.. even if you stick to solid tones.

 

The second one is a guitar hero controller actually. THanks, ill try it out.

 

You can try adding very little shades of gray on the Guitar Hero controller, were these based on a photograph?

 

Ye these were based on a photograph. What do you mean by shades of grey?

 

Can you post the Guitar Hero photo here? I'll show you the areas

 

I used this image then flipped it.

 

They look pretty good, I was never really able to get the hang of using Illustrator, so I just use the pen tool in Photoshop at incredibly high resolutions. It works okay for what I do with it.

 

Hm... I don't even see a direction of light (it's not coming from the right or left) strongly, so I guess you can leave it as is

You can add a very light gray gradient on the guitar if you want

 

Oh ok, thanks alot 8everythng thanks a bunch for your critique helped alot. thanks for the compliment your clone.

 

Simple Vectorial Design but so far really nice. Add lights and shadows .

 

Ok, i was playing around and i got this... I just copied the guitar over twice then then used the subtract pathfinder thing, and then put it onto the guitar, i think it gives it a bit better look.

 

You do a very good work to one as just started.

 

Very good indeed.
You sure that you started with illustrator only a few days ago?

 

Yep i am sure, thanks for all of the great comments.