My last poem to my ex gf

It's the first time I'm sharing a poem of mine with public This was the last poem I had written to my ex gf, I had written her like tens of other poems at our good times. I like writing poems in English, only when I'm in the mood though. I was in a critical mood when I wrote this poem. Oh well, just thought I'd share it.

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how many times did I feel asleep happily,
imagining you were laying next to me?
god knows..
god knows how much I loved you,
how much you meant to me,
I thought you knew it too, I was wrong totally.

you had been my sun,
you were in every breath I took,
in every good memory, when I'm alone..

I was the one who shared your pain when you were ill,
well I've done mistakes, I know it,
when you were sad, when you were angry..
but believe me, I always tried to help, I swear,
and I've never stopped loving you a second, know it..

I was the one who watched you sleeping for hours in Sweden,
I was the one who did more for you than your parents did,
I was the one who gave you money when your parents refused to do it,
I was the one who heated you in that cold Christmas night,
I was the one who gave you my coat after cinema that night,
and I was the one who gave you all I got..

remember those sweet ice creams?
I now understand why they tasted so good,
now that you are gone, its taste was just eating it with you, it's obvious.
I still feel that warm feeling on my chest,
left from the times you put your head.
I still hear your hair's smell,
that natural perfume of yours..

your body, that body where I experienced the love for the first time,
that body you exposed to a 2 weeks old fake love,
those curves, that shape, how could I not think you're hot?
I bet he did too..

and how could you let all these happen?
was it so easy to love another guy for you?
was it so easy to abandon me, forget all those we lived?
was it so easy to show all you got to another guy, my innocent girl?
was it why we had done so much to keep this love alive?
months long missings, cryings, hours long flights..
all that effort, all for this..

I still ****in' love you as much as I did the first day,
no matter what you have done..
and if one day, if you want this guy with broken heart again,
I'll be waiting for you under that tree where we kissed for the first time..

 

very beautiful.

 

That's really sweet.
I like the ending, gave me the shivers.

 

ohh so sweet! congrats!

 

As he crys

Nice one man.

 

Very nice and touching. I hope your ex gets to read this

 

Are you going to read it to her, Or post it?

 

cool poem, i think there is an international love story

 

Good , sing this and upload to Youtube

i like this kind "Good Bye My love"

 

Wow, excellent poem. So sweet.

 

Nice poem

Good idea.

 

excellent poem.

 

Nice Poem, So sweet..............

 

Huh.. That's Nice Poem

 

I use to write poems to before i realize is all BS and girls this days care only about MONEY ....

 

Very Nice Poem mate

I liked this stanza the

 

The last poem I sent to my girlfriend (been together 10 years now)

Old mother hubbard went to the cupboard to get her dog a bone.

When she bent over, Rover took over and gave her a bone of his own!



It must of worked because its been 8 years since I used that one
You can all use it if you like!

 

Nice poem leet but i wonder if she also feels the same way? Why not save your best poetry for the girl taht will stand by you no matter what? Xerive heheheheh thats the dice man's poetry. That guys a legend. The part that really cracks me up is when he did that cigarette twister in style lolol.

 

nice one dear!

 

Actually she read it

Yea. We were together for 17 months. She lives in Sweden and I live in Turkey. I used to fly to Sweden many times a year, and stay at her house with her parents. She came to Turkey many times as well. I was going to move to Sweden to live with her after I graduate from high school this year. That was before she f***ed up the whole thing though

Erm, my voice is not really so good

The day I find the right girl, I'll have the inspiration to write the best poem I'll ever write


Thanks everyone for their comments. I'm glad you like it all.