Hi! I want to know your opinions about my site www.toreduceweight.com What is wrong? what must be improved? what could be improved? and so on. Thank you for your time.
Hi Nino2007. I had a quick view of your site and these are my thoughts. Logo & Header I'd recommend that you capatalize the first letter of each word in your domain name. This will make it easier to read your logo. It would read as follows: ToReduceWeight.com Template I think if you find another template that is a little wider... you could fit more content with images that are relevant. Google Ad I think that if you changed the format of your google ad so that it is title only.... and not so wide... it would look better and your click rate may improve from this. Pyramid Image Not to sure what this is for. There is no explanation in regards to what it is about. Content I'd recommend that you have a friend, family or hire someone to edit your content. At present, I find it difficult to read due to improper use of words and such. Contact Page I'd recommend that you include a form for the contact page rather than just using your email address. Conclusion I think that your site could use more work... but it is a good start... and good idea! This review was done using FireFox 2.0.0.9 on Windows XP SP2. I do hope this was helpful. Respectfully, Lhlalyam
I agree. You've got to have a good content - very informative and non-generic ones. Good luck! About the overall look, I give it 6 out of 10.
Pretty bland layout in my opinion but how exciting can it be? lol. Anyways, I like the content and you've done a good job so far! Good luck!
here is my points: - unbold the text at the main section. - make the food pyramid as your logo (cool... ) - make categories for the links at your sidebar - at more contents - lastly, i suggest you to install wordpress. it is really easy to update your website with it. -cypher.
They are right...add more content...pay a web designer to get you looking top-notch...there are some good ones on DP.
The content is added every week or two.Do you think my english is bad(the first post of Lhlalyam) because i am not a natural born english speaker and if it is bad i will try to improve it.Thank you for your time.Also I will try to get a good design.
I wouldn't trust the people making two words statements about your website even if they are praising it by saying "nice nice" since all they care about is building their post count as fast as possible for the benefits that might come with that. Let's get this straight. The logo is bad. In fact, it's not a logo. It's text and I have to study it in order to see the meaning. To reduce weight. Ok, I got that, but I highly recommend you to make a logo instead, something which would look more neat and something that clearly makes it possible to see each and every word word. Secondly. The Google ad. I could say advertising is a nice thing, since it brings you money, but advertising isn't nice when it scares away people from your page even before they get to read any articles. So what you would like to do is either: - Change the size of the ad (to match the centered page) - Move the ad further down the page - Create a side bar (skyscraper) and put an Google advertisement in there instead. The image of food shouldn't be the first thing. I recommend you to make it smaller and put it after the introduction text. Then it's the left bar which reminds me of advertisement. It looks like it's a lot of random words to increase your traffic from search engines. You should remove that and create a REAL, WORKING menu instead. Some of the words cannot be clicked at, some of the words contain the very same link and all of them pretty much has the same message: Reduce weight. The contact page look messy, I'm talking about the text, it's several "spaces" between each word in the sentence "For advices ,suggestions please e-mail me." which makes it looks unprofessional and messy. Also the e-mail should not have a blue background like the word "Contact:" got. Almost all pages has their text in bold. Looks ugly, hard to read and totally unnecessary. Especially because of the small width, you should seriously consider increasing the site width. I can see that you use a free template, but you know what, get front page or another HTML tool and build it yourself. The chances are huge you will get a better result. This review doesn't concentrate about the information on your website, but your design and layout. Good luck and profitable future.
Very well said WarzMX I agree with most of what you posted. Get a proper logo, and capitalize the first letters of each word. Make your to ad have a background that blends with the page background more, right now it's far too distracting. Give your menu a background that is different from your main content area, it needs to draw the eye more. Your left sidebar is very unorganised in my opinion, get some subheaders and group your links down here appropriately. I would put your welcome text above the health triangle image, but this is my personal taste. Good luck with it!
- What is wrong? i think its to slim and plane, feels liek something is missing from it! - what must be improved? The layout, just feels asif a child as created it. what could be improved? The layout again and lack on content, looks plane lik i said before try and make your own layout? or find another one abit wider. Good luck with your site
I like the subject matter but woul dlike to see more content... Ever heard of the Maker's Diet? It's has great information. Good luck