Original content written by me - Any good?

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by theultimate1, Dec 4, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello People.

    Long ago, I had written a review for www.php.net. I know I have no rights to the article, as I have been paid for writing it. But, when I look back today, for a newbie writer that I was when I wrote it, I think it deserved far more than I was paid for it.

    I'm inviting all you veteran writers and content experts to critique my work. Please tell me the goods and bads of it, along with areas of improvement.

    It is an article that is 800 words long. I'd appreciate it a lot if someone could tell me what pay it was worth.

    Here's the link to the article: http://www.iguides.org/reviews/phpnet.html

    Regards,
    theultimate1 :)

    P.S.: If you like my work, please consider me to write for you. I have written extensively on various topics and do so, everyday. A lot of you may also not like what I'm doing, and I don't do it at all. This article just came by when I was trying to search for some help on PHP, and it attracted me to read my work. So, here I am, looking for help. Please help me. Thanks in advance :)
     
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    domainkiss Active Member

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    #2
    Hello theultimate1

    This article has 628 words, not 800... I see this at WORD. Of course program can be wrong.

    How bout article? I think its good.

    How many languages can you speak fluently theultimate1?
     
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    theultimate1 Banned

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    #3
    Hi domainkiss.

    My bad... It was a 600+ worder. I wrote 800 by mistake.

    I'm from India, and I can speak, read & write in 3 languages (English, Hindi, Kannada), and speak in 3 other Indian languages (Sindhi, Tamil, Gujarati).

    Regards :)
     
    theultimate1, Dec 4, 2007 IP
  4. The Emirates Gallastico

    The Emirates Gallastico Banned

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    #4
    It's worth $0.04 a word at the very least, probably more if you had samples to show them beforehand. :)
     
  5. theultimate1

    theultimate1 Banned

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    #5
    Seriously? Oh My God... I never thought it was that good... Not that I don't value my work, but I never thought it's worth something like 4 cents a word... By the way, thanks a lot for your words of encouragement... Your feedback gives me a great chance to go back to that link, read it over and over, and recreate the magic (if it is one...)

    I request other people looking at this thread, to give some feedback regarding my work, as well. Your feedback will help me improve on my passion of writing.

    Thanks :)
     
    theultimate1, Dec 5, 2007 IP
  6. The Emirates Gallastico

    The Emirates Gallastico Banned

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    #6
    A small tip mate - don't use the Digital Point marketplace to appraise the value of your work. It's worth a lot more than the figures offered here, and any competent buyer will realise that. :)
     
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    #7
    I don't really see anybody on DP paying $0,04 per word.. or am I blind?
     
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    The Emirates Gallastico Banned

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    #8
    There are those who do - they generally don't post here though :)
     
  9. theultimate1

    theultimate1 Banned

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    #9
    How much do you think my article is worth, though?
     
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    postguru Peon

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    #10
    Can you write on property? see below..

    Hi I want some one to post in Australian property investing forum. I am not able to start new tread not

    sure why. I guess because I am not new member. If you or anyone else wants to post in the forum please

    PM me.

    I want 40-50 post in next 20 days or so. One need to open a new gmail account and register at the forum

    which I will give link.

    Its active forum.

    Need to post some good content.

    I will provide signature file go along with your posts.

    Payment will be using paypal after you finish the Job.

    I am in Sydney.

    Thanks
    PG

    p.s. Anyone can tell me how to start new tread here?
     
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    #11
    It has multiple grammatical errors and the sentences are hard to understand.
     
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  12. theultimate1

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    #12
    I was just looking for someone to come up with this point... I'll have it checked by an expert and then post what errors popped up...

    About the sentences being hard to understand, I'm not sure if I'll agree to it... But, I admit that some sentences are rather long...

    Thanks for your feedback... :)
     
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    #13
    You could post this in the main Copywriting forum, where writers go to chat, ask questions and get tips. This one's a subforum for content creation : )
     
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    #14
    Article Wonderfully written sheer poetry is all i can say Thank You theultimate1
     
    kevingill, Dec 10, 2007 IP
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    theultimate1 Banned

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    #15
    Thank you so much for your feedback... :)

    If it was really so good, I hope we can work together in the future...
     
    theultimate1, Dec 10, 2007 IP