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You are right. It needs to get in their face some other way and then use the web site to sell the concept, if necessary. Ebay would be a great place but the shipping should be included in the price OR reduced greatly.
I chopped the shipping by a good bit. I'm considering not placing shipping costs on the purchase of 5 cases or above. Thoughts?
As the demographic of the site is going to be mostly men 25-45 I'd imagine, this is a great idea. There's not much chance of offending women customers. Even if he did, it would be minimal. Sex would work well in the product site...especially considering the name of the product.
good idea. This will encourage someone who is considering buying 3 or 4 to get the 5th. Competitions and Limited Time offers are also good. You should try and find some resources on the net about consumer psychology. Not only is it fascinating but it should also be quite helpful
Good idea. Anytime someone feels they get something for free, you are the hero. Even if they really aren't. Ever see all the infomercials on t.v. that give away 2x the supply of some product AND free shipping if you order in the next minute? People don't like paying shipping. They'd rather pay a higher price for the product (at least in their mind).
Just noticed you left the "with" underlined in the first paragraph. I was looking at your SEO and it looks like you could make it a little tighter. I can offer suggestions if you want.
Start by downloading a program called WebPositon GOLD. http://www.web-positiongold.com/ I use it on my site. It is very consistent with other recommendations I've seen. Based on the results of my web site with keywords, it seems to work. I am in the first 1-2 pages for several 2 word key phrases. Your title, for example, has room for several new keywords.