Please Review my Landing Page

good design..
just use "ARIAL" font.. it i´ll be better!

 

OHH - so these are called landing pages i now know it.

Looks good. How did you mask status bar showing url

 

Thanks MeetHere.

did a quick search and found a lil piece of JS.

<a href="url" onmouseover="window.status='display url'; return true;">anchor text</a>

Code (markup):

I hear visitors are more likely to click it if it looks like a nice url

 

I've spent a little time absorbing what you all have to say and have made some changes to the site. I've not changed the logo or added anymore images as that is one I will have to think about and work on, but I have made a lot of the changes suggested. Please let me know if it is better or worse and what you think

Thanks.

 

I would do something different with the testimonials. Right now they are so plain and I find them to be obtrusive when reading the text. Perhaps give them a white background to really set them apart from your general content (and give them rounded corners to blend in more).

 

Impressed nice site

 

One word "Shit"

 

ShitHot?

 

I was drunk last night and don't remember even typing that, sorry

 

first blush, not a site where i would spend money. Looks hoakey and fly by night.

 

Do you have any suggestions on how I might improve it?

 

Hello Sparckyz

I had a chance to look at your site. I am very interested in sites like this.. especially since this is the field I am in.

My Thoughts

Domain Name
A little long... but a good name!

Template
Not to keen on the template. If your hosting is set up with Fantastico... have a look if you can install WordPress...

You can also find a nice Free template here at DP. Here is one that I found after a quick search... Free Template

Content
Your information is great but it certainly needs a second eye to fix any spelling and grammar errors. Also, it would be good to have the second person help with clarity of any topics.

Navigation
Your links at bottom... all work... its just that some of the pages have no content at all.. When you get a contact page... I'd suggest using a Contact Form... rather than having people open up their email program to contact you...

Conclusion
You have a good potential website... Good luck!

This review was done using IE6.02 on Windows XP SP2.

I do hope this helps you.
Respectfully,
Lhlalyam

 

Thanks for the review Lhlalyam, I appreciate it .

 

Ill go write a longer review now, but the sites looking good ^^

 

Looks alrite, but you are going to have to do something with the header.

 

Would having a better header image likely increase the effectiveness of my landing page???