Do you think this is better?

I just made a drastic design change to my website which was getting some unique visitors but most of them were bouncing off.

I made this change here against the existing one here.

I would like your comments like why you liked or disliked it. Also a word on SEO aspect would be great.

 

I like the new design better. You could include key words that you are tragting in your title meta tag.

 

Thanks for replying.

I have the mets keywords tag in place. You may not have noticed it, probably.

 

the new design is so much btter then the old one.
seems more professional

 

new design is really much better.

 

Yes, the new design is an improvement. The best aspect of the original design is that the page is focused on the blue square and text, I looked directly there when opening the page and read. Try to find a starting point on the new design where you focus the attention of your visitors.

 

Definitely prefer the new version - the boxes around the text above the Google Ads on the original version were not nice so it is good that they have been removed.

There doesn't appear to be much content on this page of the site - I'd be inclined to add more keyword rich content - also offer a free report in return for email subscription so that you can remain in contact with your visitors and increase the value of them

Hope this helps
Phil

 

Thanks to all of you who suggested changes. I am going to implement each one of them in phases (my main business is article writing)

It must help, I believe. I will keep this in mind.
Thanks very much