please review my own money making blog

please review my own money making blog:


http://perfectsystemonline.blogspot.com/

not specificly the design cause thats not very good,just the post

 

I think you can go with less indentations.

 

Yeah,i pressed enter to start a new paragraph.

Like this.

and when i posed the blog strangely it left a gap.





like this

no idea why it did that....

 

Then write your article in Notepad and copy & paste it into your blog later.

 

oh,thanks will do that next time im new to the whole blog thing so i dont really no much about it at all

 

write more blogs daily and use some picture also use adsense if you have any plan .

 

i will when old enough.....

 

There is almost nothing to review there.
The blog post does not look enticing to read. It looks more like spam.
The text is too spaced-out. You have a lot of blank lines in between the text.
The URLs that you have there also make the text look like spam.