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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by cyberspirits, Aug 23, 2007.

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    cyberspirits, Aug 23, 2007 IP
  2. workathomeshop

    workathomeshop Notable Member

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    Nice site, little slow to load (I'm impatient lol ) perhaps too much content/text links on entry.

    Good luck with it
    Cheers
    Samantha
     
    workathomeshop, Sep 8, 2007 IP
  3. lojadeluxo

    lojadeluxo Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Good articles with basic blog....
    You make a good service with free service!!
    Great job!
     
    lojadeluxo, Sep 8, 2007 IP
  4. cyberspirits

    cyberspirits Peon

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    thanks give me more inputs to improve many thanks..to all who reviewed my blog
     
    cyberspirits, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  5. DaveMc

    DaveMc Peon

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    #5
    Good blog - here's a few suggestions (from someone who knows nothing about art or graphics):

    The header description text colour ("A blog which tries to cover every...") blends in with the header image too much - I can't read it properly. Find something which contrasts better.

    And...the hyperlinks that say "Earn Money Online | Get Your Blog/Website Reviewed" are too close to the blog article title ("Berkeley Open Infrastructure for Network") - put a line or two of spacing between them.
     
    DaveMc, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  6. cyberspirits

    cyberspirits Peon

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    ya thanks i improved on both of them...please check again if u can...
     
    cyberspirits, Sep 19, 2007 IP
  7. DaveMc

    DaveMc Peon

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    Looks really good now. Although there's something a little wrong in the header description text - it looks like this - "Spirituality to (LARGE BLANK SPACE), Adsense" - if I move my mouse over the blank space I see a ContentLink advert! But if I highlight the entire sentence the missing text appears saying "Spirituality to Software Reviews, Adsense, Blogger...". That's an interesting little easter egg you've put in for the user there :D.
     
    DaveMc, Sep 19, 2007 IP
  8. cyberspirits

    cyberspirits Peon

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    I put software review, but its a contextual keyword..A blessing in disguise...but what you think..as a user will it work or should that keyword be removed
     
    cyberspirits, Sep 19, 2007 IP
  9. DaveMc

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    I think it's an interesting technique - but it's up to you really. Most people would probably look in the text gap, so it's an increase in clicks at the expense of a professional appearance. When your blog gets popular, you'll probably want to remove it though.
     
    DaveMc, Sep 19, 2007 IP
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    cyberspirits Peon

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    cyberspirits, Sep 20, 2007 IP
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    Nice site its slow
     
    Amore, Sep 20, 2007 IP
  12. cyberspirits

    cyberspirits Peon

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    ya i hv corrected that too..but necessary things are to be uploaded..thanks for the review...other reviews for my blog http://cyberspirits.blogspot.com are always appreciated
     
    cyberspirits, Sep 20, 2007 IP