Review Funshayari.info & Give Suggestion!!

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    Review this website please http://www.Funshayari.info and give some good suggestion about designs because my friend created that he need good design for his website he created it roughly and he need good design for it so please help!!
     
    XTreMe, Sep 15, 2007 IP
  2. MCSneato

    MCSneato Active Member

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    Why don't you list a little bit of info about shayaris? Give some background info.
     
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    #3
    Well, the site is fairly clean and the colors are good, but that big blank spot on the top of the fold needs to go bye bye.

    I agree with MCSneato "Why don't you list a little bit of info about shayaris? Give some background info." cause I have no clue what that is... maybe you could fill that blank spot with that info.

    I assume by looking at it that they are some type of poem, but I am not too sure.

    More content is the key. People want to know what they are looking at.

    -Nick
     
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  4. XTreMe

    XTreMe Banned

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    yes you are right!!
    i tried to find but i didn't find can you give me some info?
     
    XTreMe, Sep 15, 2007 IP
  5. fastreplies

    fastreplies Banned

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    #5
    You need to reset your table ‘Choose Collection’ in the middle of the page to smaller size.
    In my browser your page appears with horizontal scroll bar.

    fastreplies
     
    fastreplies, Sep 16, 2007 IP
  6. XTreMe

    XTreMe Banned

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    hmmmm...thanks i think it is becasue of link Ad now i am going to adjust it:)
     
    XTreMe, Sep 16, 2007 IP
  7. XTreMe

    XTreMe Banned

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    done!! can you check it again and tell me anything more?
     
    XTreMe, Sep 16, 2007 IP
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    logo looks strange, also color used in the design dont quite suit up with the site concept. try have some smooth colors , as users read text more in such sites.
     
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  9. XTreMe

    XTreMe Banned

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    can you give me any clue of color or any design please?
     
    XTreMe, Sep 18, 2007 IP
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    read good magazines, you will find nice color combinations there, and try design logo urself, as u need to learn it up.
     
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    nice site with good layout and color scheme

    Good luck
     
    buyallgifts, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  12. XTreMe

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    hmmm.....no one liked it except you i neeed some sugesstion:s
     
    XTreMe, Sep 21, 2007 IP
  13. tips2berich

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    Yes you are right these are small poems or couplets. The language used is a mix of Hindi and Urdu. These couplets are really famous in countries like India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, Nepal, etc.

    Xtreme - you can now write these couplets or shayaris in Hindi itself. There are so many editors provided by different service providers like google provides a transliteration tool to convert whatever you write in english to hindi. You can find out some of these tools and consider writing the couplets in hindi. I saw some white space in the top fold on your site. You can utilise this space for something interesting.
     
    tips2berich, Sep 21, 2007 IP
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    Besides this couplets can have different colors in them like love, affection, hatred, patriotism, anger, etc., etc. There have been big authors or writers of these couplets like Mirza Ghalib, etc., etc.
     
    tips2berich, Sep 21, 2007 IP