Recently I am running a campaign for the following forex trading system: http://www.profitguideforex.com/ Please help me review on: - the outline - the writing style Thank you so much, Note that I am also uploading a link exchange page (linked from this site) for the forex-related sites or forums or blogs, so if you are interested, pls help me review and pm me your reps.
The design seems like a generic sales page design, but apparently that's a design that works for a lot of people. Your writing style is excellent, in my opinion. You've also got the graphics and testimonials to back up the sales pitch. I think it's an excellent sales page.
I think the colours combination is brelliant but the font style not too attractive if u can use few bold italics then it will be more fascinating.But even now its not too bad but thats just my suggestion.THx
Hi your site looks good. It is kind of sales page site. The writing style is ok. Are you a forex broker or investor? I'm also interested in forex. Still learning how to profit. I have a site about forex. ForexProperty.com. Does your site sell about forex trading software? Regards Edy
Hey, It seems to be a very good writing style. A+ to it... I think you need to add some graphics to it. This will help you a lot...
Thank all for your comments Edy, I am promoting a forex trading system, not a software, THanks If you want we can do JV.
Its a nice site, I think your writing style is really nice, I would maybe add a few more design features so that your site looks a bit nicer and not just like a sales letter, maybe a background that goes with your header? good luck!
The info given and the writing/selling style is decent - the site could definitely be improved with better graphical work - some of the borders are quite hard on the eye, the product box is a little rough around the edges, and the performance graphs could do with either scaling down, being inverted (so its not a big block of black against a white bg) or "beautified" in some other way. Its definitely got the look and feel of the types of sales pages you find for products of this nature - however if i'm being honest, personally, I am always turned off by such sites. A fresher, more professional approach to the website would, to me, imply a professional and reliable end-product, and give me more persuasion to buy. I hate being critical but I do hope i've either helped or provoked a few thoughts for you. All the best and good luck with your site and product =)
The text , content is first rate. But you could do with a different colour combination for the banner right on the top. Also a simple logo would be nice to supplement the name. Cheers.
Banner letters are a bit choppy around the edges. I kinda like the color combo. I especially like them on the charts. The orange makes it very easy to see. I've noticed lots of people doing sales pages like this, so they must work. I usually bounce right away from them when I land there, so my advice would be to make it look less like a sales page. But that's just me; maybe others are different. Good luck with it!
thank you all, i just receive a warning from the admin that i should not give back reps so i can not give reps, but seems all of you guys are voluntarily helping, thank so much,
Hi Sirnoucamp What kind of forex trading system? I'd like to do JV with you. Pm me with the detail. Regards
Most internet users are getting prone to closing webpages that look like the standard sales page. You should do something fancy at the top to make it more unique. That would at least keep the visitors long enough to read your selling points. (Just my 2 cents).
I think the design is too simple. It is giving a look of some sales site. And the fonts are a bit large and small. When i started looking at it, it seems so simple but after getting down it is good.. I think the starting of the site should be more colourful
Looks like every other site in that niche. Try to make it look like an actual website that's not trying to get money from their users. Instead of a white background, try black or something. Where "Bonus #1: Trend Forecasting with Technical Analysis" is, the box is incorrectly aligned. I'd center it.
I like your webpage which has a good sales pitch.But I must tell you that you should add a background color to your webpage.
On white Background the Red color is not suited, u can try Blue color or something like that. over all this site is looks fine!!